testaments old world literature/
tales more complex than the sphinx and the riddler/
drug ministers peddlin lies to the establisment/
text books sayin we were slaves and can be sent back again/
to the motherland africa to be exact/
u aint african cause you black/
arabians ,persians settlin creatin circumference and the radius of the pyramids/
miniscule points viziers annoint pharoahs to praise the sun god inshallah allah akbar/
in the light of judgement to stand far/
thrown out the 5% rise to rule the world again/
devilish ethnicities syphillis injected on deficient kids left cripplin/
enter the almighty visualization of spike lee/
god created the messiah of rap rakim to spite me/
the perfect image and persona of lyrical ayatollah hiphop religious state of affairs brains swell ova/
to throw the weak chains from tentacles/
simple decimated sensible from mental projectibles piercin the left clavicle/

inshallah

This was tight , , ,but should have been longer , , u got wat it takes to become an ill emcee , , juss make ur drops longer,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48119

Return da favour nigga http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48119

devilish ethnicities syphillis injected on deficient kids left cripplin....................ill!....tight multies here dun,all over the track the multies ripped.....thought maybe it lost its topic on one or two lines,but apart from that it was illness...shit was crazy,im likin it very much so....keep it up....mashallah cats will stop sleepin and peep this nahmean...


keep droppin dun.....

bismillah ir rahmaan ir raheem

that was a tight drop dawg, the flow is immense, straight A wordplay and vocab!

"devilish ethnicities syphillis injected on deficient kids left cripplin/
enter the almighty visualization of spike lee/
god created the messiah of rap rakim to spite me/"

yo, I liked that shit.. It did need to be longer.. you got to work on the structure, or arrangment of words.. it seemed choppy in places but could have been better with a little editing... tight shit tho... Holla

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This joint is nice though... good wordplay, multi's, etc. You got shit on lock, gotta make it longer though, HOLLA. Where you been at?

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