![]() |
|
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
|
![]() |
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Middle Weight
|
"So What" .. my most heartfelt piece so far, please look.
IP: 40CC C97B
'So What' -- Mic Booth
So what... that sound you make is bound to break ..I found that hate is old love surrounding fate So what... Its over because of a little boredom? Four months were stored up just to tell me that your done? You poor slut... So what? Its like nothing happened and now you ignore me? Its ok if YOUR boring I still want you to be my shorty.. Its corny I know ..so what, you tore me to pieces And the more that I'm thinkin I coulda swore I was speechless The minute I saw you, the second our mind and eyes met Those blue pearls that couldve outshined a diamond All your teases and flirts, got me in trouble in class Feelings I couldnt speak of in words, I fell in love with you fast So what.. for a year we talked each night all alone The best conversations, then fell asleep right on the phone So what, a first love, I'd always boast in the mirror Forgot shes been with someone else for most of the year But I got her, So what... I was betraying my best friend I then relized I was opening a gate to a dead end So what, I walked through, I know he hated me much But Me and my girlfriend still had the greatest 3 months We'd see each other all the time, dates night and day So what if that all quickly went down a flight of drains How could you even imagine of doing the cliche of the slutty I wanted you tortured but to still say that you loved me So what if I wanted to set fire to the carpet, quick So I could burn in the words I ever spoke to this heartless bitch. 3 years later, and my hearts still trapped in a cageish cubicle Like I dont deserve to sit across from you and say your beautiful ...See you in the hallways and we barely speak You look so happy, but my hearts still very weak.. So what, I hate you.. and I havent dropped a tear So what, I love you.. I havent stopped for years. Whew. Finally. |
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Middle Weight
|
IP: 40CC C97B
Dickheads
|
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
BANNED for biting
|
IP: FF98 53B8
oooooooo deep emotional drop .. . I was feelin it dawg.......Overall u get a 8/10 , , , return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=48317
|
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Middle Weight
|
IP: 40CC C97B
OOOOOOOOOOOOO
|
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
BANNED for biting
|
IP: FF98 53B8
Nuclear return da favour http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=48317
Last edited by Bash : 05-19-03 at 11:36 PM. |
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Guest
|
IP: C1DA C961
why do you people post and come to this shit???
this is a battle site not a pussy site |
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Banned
|
IP: 2AF2 3A0F
its aight rhyme... but what the fuck man its just a bitch... stop being such a pussy
|
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Middle Weight
|
IP: 40CC C97B
Slut, fuck you immature faggots.
I hope you die of fucking a bitch with AIDS, seriously. "Its just a bitch" Fuck You. |
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
BANNED for biting
|
IP: FF98 53B8
U niggaz dumb , , so wats wrong wit some1 making a soft drop to their girl , , , ,I do dat..................
|
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Guest
|
IP: 3FF9 C72A
fuck them fools that think this shits stupid....one of the hardest things to write is some shit like this...its fuckign difficult,if they ever had girlfriends they might understand,but guys dont like poetry written to them,so they lucked out i guess.....this was welll written nuclear,fuck them fools got no idea what they talkin...least you do somethign different then most cats,its good to see shit like this...the ending was nice,the i hate i love you thing,thats was good...and the part about sitting across from her and not being able to say nothign,know what you mean,unlike them fools above that dont understand,they still dealin with puberty....faggots.
|
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Guest
|
.Reply.
IP: A6F7 168B
This joint was aight... didn't grab my attention all that much. It had some nice punches and wordplay though.
|
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Guest
|
IP: 3FF9 C72A
punches??its a damn verse about a girl,and what happened between them...it has no use of punches??its not a battle rap...what?
|
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Middle Weight
|
IP: 1BA0 E69C
Yeah that was the worst reply I've ever seen
Punches and wordplay in a topical about a girl Fucking itio |
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Guest
|
IP: A2C2 E6C9
It's cause Enigmatic knows shit about rap, he puts words together and pretends to hispanic cause he wants to kill himself lol
|
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
|||||||
Middle Weight
|
IP: 40CC C97B
With my tongue inside a nun
|
|||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|