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somethin i wrote quick
IP: 1D61 74AB
As i penetrate ur skull through the forces of telepathy/
my mind generates thoughts that travel through ur blood stream/ u open up ur eyes u livin my life now/ ur soul has been chosen to fight on the highest grounds/ A military seargent is waiting at the gates/ givin u a number, ur mind is in a state of confusion/ ur thinkin this is an illlusion/ ur lifes clock was cut short like a bombs diffusion/ now ur duckin under bullets stayin clear away from mines/ angel spill a liquid killlin what was once sunrise and the oceans tides, the whole world is at a stand still/ ur chasin after shadows in this land is kill or be killed/ ur made to kill, the word emotion has no meaning/ missles touching down spreading sickness through the region/ armed wit every evil force the earths rotation changes course/ from out the sky galactic wars/ a fallen star shows no remorse |
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IP: 9C38 A373
telepathy/
my mind generates thoughts that travel through ur blood stream//that doesnt rhyme this had no meaning.....alrite vocab meta n multies...........u should spit about a topic.......alrite for a newbie |
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BANNED for biting
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IP: FF98 53B8
Yeah i kno , ,this was aight for a newbie.............return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48317
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IP: 2AF2 3A0F
he said it was a qiuck rhyme... but yeah not bad.
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