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B.R.E Prezents: the war has begun
IP: E07A 5D92
to many that don't care that i write
that i have this gift of words that i can't fight in my mind Rhymes so appealing, mind stealing,creating a feeling like no other writing uncontrollably my hands are stained with pain that I soon gain to be sane to write i fight for the right to speak freely but only me can feel me deep within me this chamber where i hold many thoughts thoughts of like, of others, New children and there mothers thoughts of passion, pain and the world full of lovers as i hind scared under the covers i am stubborn to my passion all mixed and crashing flashing like slashing bashing through this world of war imprisoned in this pain i lure to cure like i am chained to a cold floor not being able to move locked in this jail i call home alone not being able to explore weakened and poor from the use of my legs as my mind cries and begs freedom where has it all gone prisoners fight alone cloned to battle and leave life behind searching but death is all they find am i imagining all i saw on t.v can it be that we fight to be free yet they are still controlled as we see being heroic just be living when we are the ones who should be giving and them receiveing leaving them all back it is freedom this world lacks .....We see a war won, but the war has just begun... |
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Yo eviley/
i see what ur preachin to me/ the was has begun/ no way was it just one/ the thoughts and plans of an innocent man/ compare to nothing when a government wants to rule as many as they can/ so what will one do/ nothing, cause one has been doomed unable too/ so thats why we should stick our ryhmes cause they cant control that too |
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IP: B694 D469
ha i meant the "war has begun" and "was it just won"
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IP: E07A 5D92
hard too tell.....
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IP: 7B79 66E1
what the hell was that
chutney....lmao good drop eva...getting more and more points across that are great.. the flow of words was perfect in this one...i like it a lot...cant wait to see you...love you
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thanxz Baby.....
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This was tight. The rhyme scheme was kinda hard to see but it was tight.
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thank you again appreciate that shit....
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Ill piece , , ,, , Nice content , , i was feelin it , ,, , , Keep spittin Family
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....ILL drop sista...def feelin it 100%......uppin fo my gurl...
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IP: ADA7 6BD6
thanxz fam........
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IP: D187 D7C9
uppin
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Tha flow was nice girl stay up on tha talent.
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thanxz R-sinic
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