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05-22-03, 03:34 AM

InDaScriptures

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"Too Smooth"...jus relax and listen

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jus some story line shit...peep it...called Too Smooth

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peace

05-22-03, 05:37 PM

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beat wuz nice...i like the concept...flow wuz rite,delivery wuz good, lyrics were good...overall nice track...

05-23-03, 01:31 AM

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shits straight. your flow is on point and got some nice rhyme schemes, but it seems you start losin it the second verse. work on it.

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