thanks, i would rather lose then have this languish in the land of the undecided.

Ok, the damn php code is telling me the post is too short so disregard what follows.
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NAH, THERE ARE NONE...
ILL SHOW YOU (NOT INCLUDING MIDDLE AND BEGINNING RHYMES)...WHICH ARENT NEEDED EXCEPT FOR A MORE COMPLEX FLOW...


RHYME SCHEME:
RAP 1:
CASKET, HARASSMENT
SINK ME. SEE
BETTER, LETTA, SWEATA, VET YA.
STRAIGHT, DESECRATE, MEET THE GATE,

I COULD GO ON...BUT EVERYTHING RHYMED...

yeah, you see, my biggest problems are with the second rhyme (massacre, pacifier, stir, etc.). I hope that you can clarify it for me, as well as the "vet ya" thing. I was not aware "vet" in any form was a verb.

MASSACRE AND PASSIFIR RHYME PERFECTLY...

AND VET YA...ITS CALLED WORDPLAY...VETS KILL OTHER RHYMERS THERFORE VET YA MEANS KILL YOU...ANYONE WHO READS IT WILL MOT LIKELY KNOW VET YA IS SOME FORM OF LYRICALLY KICKING UR ASS.

i am sorry, but massacre ( http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=massacre ) and pacifier ( http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=pacifier ) dont rhyme, whatever verbal contorsion you put on it. period.

there is a difference between wordplay ( http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=wordplay ) and completely fucking up the english language.

Examples:
massacre rhymes with capacitor
pacifier rhymes with fire

HAHA..THIS GUY IS A DUMBASS!!!!

PACIFIER DOES NOT RHYME WITH FIRE YOU COMPLETE MORON...I CHECKED OUT UR STUPID RHYMING DICTIONARY SHIT AND IT ONLY RHYMES THE LAST SYLLABLE NOT THE WHOLE WORD...AND ANY REAL MC CAN TELL YOU THAT MASSACRE AND PACCIFER (THE THING A BABY LIKE U USES)...DO RHYME...SO GET A FUCKING CLUE...AND STOP USING A GAY ASS RHYING DICTIONARY AND BECOME A REAL MC!!! LOL THIS CAT DOESNT THINK PACIFER AND MASSACRE RHYME.....GET A MOTHA FUCKING CLUE!!!

MAS RHYME WITH PASS
IC RHYMES VERY CLOSELY WITH IF
AND FER AND CRE RHYME PERFECTLY...THAT IS WHY UR DICTIONARY WONT RHYME THEM...ONLY A TRUE MC CAN FIND A WORD LIKE THAT...ADMIT IT U LOST AND STOP UR BITCHING...I CAN BEAT U WHENEVER I WANT..

are you out of your fucking mind? check the goddam link to pacifier at dictionary.com. the word you are thinking of is spelled PACIFIER. . . IER not IR not "PACCIFER" or whatever the fuck you think it is. and fire rhymes a hell of a lot better then massacre. IC and IF do not rhyme in the least. We are dealing with text, so verbal inflection does not apply. Learn to speak, and while you are at it, learn to fucking spell.

I dont know where you got the "rhying dictionary" shit, but I assure you that I come up with all my rhymes myself and manage to spell them somewhat correctly. Before creating accusations, you might want to check out an actual dictionary just so people are able to read what the hell you are trying to say

Punches: Feeble
Flow: dick-tator(Still not the best)
originality: Feeble
Personals: Feeble(Still little, dictator's sounded kind of kiddish)
Overall: Feeble
keeep doin your thing dogg

Bonecrusher:

when you say "kiddish". do you refer to my reluctence to use every curse word i know, or that I refrain from equating homosexuality with some sort of verbal slur. I am as straight as bill clinton or jfk, but I dont like putting down any sort of people. I do have problems with using "nigga", but I usually have no problem with others using it when it is not gratuitous. Your signature uses it roughly 7 times along with an uncounted number of other useless curse words (biatch, motherfucker, other absurdly spelled versions of same words). I am just wondering, do you expect that shit to actually make any sense? Is it just to pad your rhymes? I'm just asking. Since we are talking about all things "kiddish"

yo good dictator ya if wanna battle me hit me up................................................ ......................................

yea...this guy is a free win...he

some more votes.......

andsomeone clarify for him that pacifier (pronounced- pass-i-fir) rhymes better than fire

i think you both had a good flow, as bone crusher said you were childish & careless like it didnt matter if you won or not & im not votin cuz im kool with feeble which i am its just that i feel that he hit harder & was more creative.
good battle though but i must say feeble took it.

lmao at the opener of feeble mind'd's verse lol harrasment

but doc i dun even think your shit was a battle verse more like a general diss to anyone not really nohin too spectacula f.m had some dope shit in his verse at most of the time

vote feeble

hey yo...thaks for voting....if uv got anything u need me to vote on.....actually, u can send m a link here if ya do, but it wont let me vote right now...i just pm'd the administrator...im well over 100 posts...its messed up...bu thanks for voting..