Check in's by Sunday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

Topic...
A dark secret

__________________

damn...fit to be an excellent
match...hope that you fuckers
check in...that would be bad
if you didnt...so have fun .
this match looks dope....








................................................

Mad Man: I'm pretty sure this'll be for next week's title bout

__________________

Checkers.


http://www-124.ibm.com/developerwor...es/checkers.gif

Im Here.... Just Got Back From Vacation... Should be A Dope Battle
.................................................. .................................................. ..

Oh...and um, I take it, its next Tuesday the verse's are due by? Cuz...errr its Tuesday today, and I'm not going to be on for long, only a couple of minutes, until tomorrow.

A Dark Secret eh? Alrighty...

• “I hold a dark secret
  I like to bleed and release it
  Pain in my palm, completely glove it
  True hatred, I’m the epitome of it
  Maybe this darkness would lift if I stopped gravity
  Pin my body to a crucifix, cuz its crossed me
  I stare into a mirror, and despise what I see
  So now...goodbye
  .........................................Kevin”

A Bic’s remnants stuck to what’s left of a tree|
No life sentiment in his final testament, on his desk for his parents to read|
Chest pulseless, he lay in the tub, taking a bleach bath|
Ingested some Javex, trying to get rid of his body’s mask|
Chunks of skin chiseled out of his arm and cheek sit in the sink|
There was a reason he had to get 'clean', made his body leak, and took a toxic drink|
Since the day he was born, darkness has fallen|
Everyone around seem to be in a different contrast column|
Compared with family, there's something about him, he's at the opposite end of the spectrum|
DNA proves he is theirs, even though its like he's from a different selection|
Parents are as they've been shone upon by a bright light|
While he looks like he stood a little too close, and got burnt by that light|


Now in heaven, he sees a figure he hasn't seen since he was seven|
"Great Grandma...?!?" "Yes, listen, we need to talk Kevin"|
"I know why you did this to yourself, and I have the answer you've been wondering for so long|
When your Great Grandfather, Ted, and I we're still young, late 20's, I was done wrong|
Your Great Grandpa was gone for weeks on end, for business|
There was a black man, who...beat me, and to give his fist a rest|
So...he raped me, 9 months later I had a daughter|
Your Grandma, only one person could be her father|
She had white skin like I do|
Unlike Ted and I, her eyes were not blue|
Her hair was fairly curly, and dark brown|
While ours was both blonde and went straight down|"
I never told anyone, I couldn't|
I'm sorry Kevin, I should have never given you this burden|

Here's Evolve's verse

__________________

Oh Shit!!!.........This Honestly Wuz The Best Topical Battle I Seen Ever....No Shit.......Bruk.....WHen I Read Urs I Was Like Damn....This Cat Really Is Sick.....Not Just WIt Rhymes But HE Needs Jesus In His Life....lol.........Yo.....But Seriously That Wuz mad Ill......Then I Got To Evolve's........He Came Just As Sick....But.........I Felt His More......It Wuz Deep.......SO Therefore....I'm goin Wit Evolve......It Wuz Hard....But There It is..

__________________
Blessed wit Skillz

I cannot vote....
This was brilliant...
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.................................................. ...............pz

__________________

Thanks 13th, its all good, honour to have you say that.

Sand, lmfao, no doubt though, feel you on that.

hmmmmmmmm

hmmmmmmmm...........hmmmmmmmm

ok......both verses were dope and dealt with the topic well and in imaginative ways
but there can be only one winner.....eeny meeny miney mo.......
nah....dammit.....its hard......but Bruk gets my vote on this one
i liked the way he came with his verse better than Evolves.....but just marginally

Since the day he was born, darkness has fallen|
Everyone around seem to be in a different contrast column
^that was dope

like sand said though it was really too close to call....dope shit....

now is it 1-1 or do any of these votes count since they forgot to Poll Vote??............................................ .......................................

I closed the poll. Go ahead and re-open it if you like, but I thought this was just for RBTL record not battle record.

__________________

poll is closed^
for some reason mad man doesnt make the polls last 5 days

111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222