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Topic...
At the helm

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Seen it.

Helm = Front of a boat, where you steer it from, not exactly the best topic but i'll be here. .

The Story Of Paul Reynolds, The Aspiring Rapper...


Each day he'd sit writing,
rhyming on several subjects
Life got him down,
but promised success so he didnt get upset.
Instead he'd vent through words,
use them as a way out
battled local kids
to help get recognition in the underground
He wanted to get famous,
guested on various compilations
hoping to get noticed
and have his shit played on radio stations
He was an underground sensation,
dropping tracks bi-monthly
Overwhealmed when he finally
got a letter from a record company.
A local label wanted to sign him,
give him his first step into the buisness
This would be his oppourtunity
to silence a lot of critics
His lyrics always consistant,
with knowledge of the Backpackers Age
Gained acclaim in magazines
and featured on every front page
Paul knew before he signed
how shady the industry was
but before he knew it,
he'd become hooked in the world of drugs
Theres only so much a body can take
before it begins to decay
and over the months,
the cocaine had worn his stomach away.
Later that day,
Paul was found collapsed in his dressing room
Hie eyes bloodshot, body shaking -
died on the way to hospital.
Drugs are ruining the music industry,
so remember the story of Paul
who was At The Helm of his career,
had it in his grasp - and lost it all.

Peace.

MAN NOBODY ON HERE CAN SPITE FOR REAL I WOULD SPITE SOMETHING BUT I M THE NEW GUY ON THIS WACK S**T!!!! SO TOMMORR

^ Shut up.
His vote wont count, and i figured you guys didnt know it was a boat, and meant it as in, and the start of a new oppourtunity or something, thats why i took the topic the way i did.

Its Monday where i live, im guessing this kid no-showed, so would you guys mind leaving feedback at least?

Peace!

where you live vortex??...forget that tupac lving wannabe rapper faggot...he dunno wah thes saying...i owuld spit somethign but im new guy on this shit...ahahhaha<<herbish........


niceness verse vrotex...that kid sounds like me,apart fom the getting successfuil batlign cats and getting recognition part..lmao...the cocaine...was...no longer...thank god.but i understand how he feels,all i want is someone to listen to my shit and gimme a chance,nahmean,thats how i feel,thats how thi srhyme made me feel,it was a very distant way of goign a tth etopic,i enjoyed it,was a sad ending ...but a good one,he gave all his shit away to substance....tis a bad thing....i wonder how many cats end up doign that to themselves,its way to easy to do,i know that for a fact,so i fel tthis one majorliy vortex,nice rhyme scheme,nic ewords,good story,nicely written,to bad the other cat no showed,wouldve been hard competition...check out my verse against shabaz when its all set up and posted....shoudl be tomorrow ro the next day depending on the time ifference,and when shabaz posts....
couda been a helm,as in a helmet...but eh...at the helm...not such a good topic,but you did it well anyway dun...keep it up.

bismillah

^ Cheers my man, and i live in the UK - so yeah, there prolly is a time difference. .

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little less then a day.your about 7 hours behind me,in perth,and america is about a day behind me....im in front for once...hmmmm....doesnt sound right...ha. is this 100 characters...better be dammit

^ lol.

Dunno where this cunt is, but i better get the win this week though. . i want a shot at Phrantik's belt. .

just seen this...imma drop tonite....
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the helm huh? iight here we go..imma spit by 8 pm tonite.
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ittl be late but i have finals all week so i couldnt get on...

^ Your late, you lose - you didnt even check in.

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i did check in...^^^quote..jsut saw this...end quote..that is a check in-imma drop right now....
damn aint nobody lose