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aight this ones called happy..although im not happy at tha moment i thought i'd post it...
Happiness has finally come Prevailed through all the pain Finally the sun has come Prevailed over all the rain Life is good I’m loving it more everyday However it’s not stopping But getting better in everyway After a long dark period Finally found what I’ve been searching for Great friends, great family And much much more I ampast all the darkness And can only see light Past all the frowning And can only smile bright Finally at peace with myself Something which my heart has yearned But it didn’tcome with ease Or without lessons learned There’s no point in dwelling in the past I earn nothing from it Although I can’t change it I can certainly learn from it So as I continue life without him I can never forget the past I’ve learned from his mistakes I’m at peace with him at last I know what he did was wrong And I look at all the nights I cried Nights where tears forever streamed my face Trying my best to hide I hid my feelings during the day And at night I let it all go During the day I smiled And at night I let the tears flow He created an emptiness in my heart One of nothing but a whole He caused me nothing but trouble And left me with pain I couldn’t console Because of him I was never atpeace Rather always split in two Nothing could fix it At least nothing anyone else could do Now there are no tears None to be seen from my eyes No more sleepless nights No more helpless cries No longer will I feel incomplete Now longer will I ask myself why No longer will I wish he was here No longer will I cry I’m smarter because of it I’m stronger because of the past All those endless nights Are finally gone at last Now I’m whole again Realizing I’m better than he Now I feel no emptiness Realizing I don’t need him to be Happy its longer than i usually write but i had alot to say..neways tell me watchall think..again its not one of my best peices but jus holla |
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IP: C1DA C961
Hey...I thought it was real nice...You can really express your feelings through poetry..Thats a gift
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It's pretty tight. I'm feeling it thought because there was times in my life I was happy and figured everything will be smooth sailing. But then life goes on and you stop being happy. Keep dropping.
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IP: 0A27 50A8
thnx for tha luv twiztid and necromancer. much appreciated. uppin
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IP: 40B2 9385
WOW that was really good, was really feelin it. You had alot to say and I like the ending =)
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