my rymes still be ill u dont really want it/
i suggest u chill u dont really want it/
number one im still u dont really want it/
this shit aint ice its heat/
you dont want to defeat/
nice try nelly i dont mean to be bold/
put that hott in herre bullshit on hold/
and lets get down to the facts of the matter/
and in the dictionary under whack rap u da rappa/
simply cause u lackin the spactacula vanacula/
and hip hops character seems to been in back of ya/
either that or ya truly amatuer/
im askin ya how does it feel to have the whole world laugin at ya/
u jus to stupid to see i was made on the streets and you were made on MTV/
how u gonna talk about my nose who attacked me/
when u stay guzzlin those pills for ya acne/
my nose comes from a line of kings/
ya acne comes from u eatin the wrong things/
ya words dont make me HURT they make me WORK/

This is as Simple as ur name.........................Ur rhymes were whack...............Up ur vocabulary and Metaphors , and also wordplay

i didnt even finish readin it...haha....well i guess its ight....but not the greatest...or the "illest" hahaha....but its ight fo a newb...butbeing a newb really shouldnt be an excuse cuz when u get on here u should already know how to spit....but whatever...check mine..."dad this song is fo you"...payce

yea dis was tight for noob man, u just make sure u learn yo shit huh,,, vanacula whats that mean i cant find it

vanacula means rappin

yo you wanna battle?

i will battle u hit me up wit a start

lets battle tomorrow....cuz i gotta get off and go to bed...ight..payce.......be one tomorrow