haah tis a bitch this equipment at times innit?.


nice words chrit,seemed like you were reallyputting yourself into this peice,liked the chorus,it was good story,fuck cat sthat base talent purely on racial factors,its a bitch...they jsut cant hack getting their place taken by someone else...fuck them cats,but it seems to have paid off for you...having to double the talent,ahs really paid off,someone that dont give up on it after all that shows character,and the will to succeed with thi sshit,you gon do well no doubt....i liked th epeice all round,no huge words,kept it simple,worked perfectly well with it,keep spitting,lookin forward to more shit from you,and hearing the audios...

bismillah

<<<< has given up on his audio equipment!!!!

guess we'll all just have to wait til july when I record the demo

uppin.....................

this shit was ill chrit, how come u ain't post open mics before?

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never really wrote my shit down

ya know...

normally I just take a beat and freestyle a verse to it

this was the first one I've truly written out

well this was crazy anyways,yo, keep writin cuz they all fire

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man i really like this shit-whether it is ur life or not then i dunno but i felt it so what im sayin...is either the piece is well written or its from the heart y'kno...by the way my piece was just lookin for pointer y'kno im drop a deeper piece later if ya got a min

nice chrit-i wanna see more

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all is my life....

too bad its so cliche'

but yeah be on the lookout in the next weak for my second piece

tentatively called "street prophecies"

Yo......I Felt This C...............It Was Nice...........We Should Collab
Some Time..................................Keep Doin What U Doin......1

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gosh chrit that was damn good, can't wait to see ya next one

yo Chrit i've bee writing for a while,actually thought i had sumthin before I came online to forums like this--learnin alot--man i got far ta go---

you got it goin on--good stuff-----blessings to ya life man--it's whats made ya you

any way check out my first attempt

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50386

let me know what ya think
anyone

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good to see the comments

Yea this was an ill drop, i really liked it and I look foreward for to reading all your new drops when you get them up cause i think right now with this and if you drop some more open mics ya can own the thread. I will also have to read some of ya battles and all to get a betta feel of ya but like it.