Peep the scripture,
The content in the rhyme and the way that I deliver,
Hororrifyin' words since my days of a beginner,
Catholics since then have considered me a sinner,
Releasin' vocal razors givin' foes a facial trim,
Rippin' heads off competition tearin' every single limb,
My click might not roll as deep as the average,
As individuals- spit like the meanest savage,
Takin' your position spittin' what you couldn't manage,
Triangular Bermudas and we causin' clicks to vanish,
Rhymes is distributed at form that's just so lavish,
Splashin' guppies into danger waters in the dark,
Till I over flood the oceans and then sink the Noah arc,
Watch continents split in 2 and make 'em grow apart,
Similar to German soldiers and like Joseph the Russian,
Rockland Projects brainstorm and we causin' mad destruction,
Got muthafukas runnin' like I'm Hitler's resurrection,
Pay attention to the lecture 'cause I'm beginin' the mic checkin',
Head fetcher got you duckin' like we was in war trenches,
Kamikazes take their own as the situation tenses,
Shit too graphic causin' you to loose both eyes and the lenses,
Bars are radiation now witness loss of senses,
The only one that's left is,
Be that one of your sensations,
Injections inserted but can't take the penetration,
Minutes later you feelin' the intoxication,
Indications for the rest of ya'll to move the fuck out,
Rabbit's feet ain't meanin' nothin'-
Ya'll stand there with your luck out,
Fortune tellers hide their balls 'cause tonight is Kristallnaucht,
And we gon' be gettin more air time than the fella Lindbergh got,
Soarin' through the skies as we defy the laws of gravity,
I bomb like Hiroshima with every word of profanity,
Ya'll quick to make your moves but ain't nothin' really passin' me,
Violate your style till the shit's beyond harassing "b",
Ain't really givin' a fuck about your wack ass standard "g",
Tuskegee salutin' the click so you best respect 'em,
All thoughts in allignment- and my rhymes kept in spectrum,
Peep the beef that I done shitted out the rectum,
Ill flows I select 'em- but all thrown randomly,
At high velocity causin great calimity,
Quick to peel your whole click-
Watch 'em turn yellow like bananas be,
Hip hop's forever the metality.

Yo GrYm I liked it--it wa sa good spit-ya gotz some tight shyt
lottsa Imagination n Creativity
so please come & critique Me

my first post on open mic
Mystical Minstrel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50386

Thanks

Keep tha peace
cuz ya know ya gotta soul

Creative Verse yo...........i wus feelin this deffinitly


NICE DROP

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wut he said ^^^^^^^^

Thanks Peace

uppn

i feelin it.................it was aight................My click might not roll as deep as the average,
As individuals- spit like the meanest savage,
Takin' your position spittin' what you couldn't manage,
Triangular Bermudas and we causin' clicks to vanish......................................pure hot shit......................keep it up........................7/10.........................