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Old 05-27-03, 07:38 PM   #1
PyrO861
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The Return

IP: 4577 CD9A

Hey yo, it's me,
Da one and only Py-rO.
I've returned to show ya once again,
Just how much I know.
Hope ya enjoy-da-show,
Cuz this time all you bytches betta go.
I'm back,
to talk smack,
and continue my-attack,
on this rap shyt,
ready to make-a-crack.
Like an earthquake, 10 on da-richtor-scale,
I be bouncin' into town,
and bustin' outta jail.
Baby I'm able,
Little bit un-stable.
Don't try to slow me down, you motha-fuckin hatA!
Cuz I'll put you outta style, just like da macarenA!
Yeah, I got me a new baby,
She loves me, maybe she's crazy.
But all I know is we got somethin great.
The fire is still burnin, watch what I can create!
Rhymes are misunderstood,
Some people think I should,
Quit this writin', and if I could I would,
Throw their criticism right back at 'em.
PyrO, back again to tell all them.
Screw you, this is my life.
Word up, homey, and watch out for my knife!
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Old 05-27-03, 07:46 PM   #2
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this needs some extreme work mostly on your punches and how you break your bars i don't much else to say except that was wack
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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun
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Old 05-27-03, 07:48 PM   #3
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Whackest Piece i ever read
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Old 05-27-03, 10:24 PM   #4
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Whack as in good, or bad?
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Old 05-27-03, 10:25 PM   #5
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Dont u kno wat whack means.....
Whack means that ur verse SUCKED...................
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