aiyo this is really new to me i have never done this internet rapping before but felt the need to give me some critique.....

we spit the go hot shit /
for the niggas on the block shit/
thats where we came from/
we still in the game son/
we had to slang caine son/
to stack bank and get the street fame/
to get outta the crack game/
the way we live either we end up dead/
or get caught up by the feds/
i never lose sleep at night but ill turn you into an insomniac/
paranoid of me and my boys coming outta the dark/
you aint got enoufgh power to make me stop/
if i cant make it on mine then ill take it to your block/
and sell to your people and cop your rock/
fuck it if it comes to war we gon bring it/
we got heaters thatll leave more shells in ya top then adidas/
something you dont wanna fuck with SO dub/
even the kids on our block got a .38 snub/
we got hoes that'll let you fuck and tell ya they love ya/
next thing you know you get found in the dumpster/
pur mindset is get the fucking paper and fucking jet/
get in our way dog you getting fucking wet/
listen dog i'm warning you don't step on my corner my crew will make sure you end up a motherfucking goner/
i'ma leave you paranoidand make you a fucking recluse/
scared of my shooters running fucking lose/
so let me break it down for you/
we gon kill everyone arond you/
and everyone down for you/
B-EZ and J Rokah ghetto gangsters like Lucinao, Capone and Gotti keep fucking around and they'll never find ya body


SOW ---- Soldiers Of War no one can touch us Keeping it gutter baby!!!!!
B-EZ with my nigga J Rokah catch us when we drunk we'll drop ya!

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If you want war we got that/
so ya'll hear me i'ma shout that/
we took the streets now we taking rap/
had it since birth and ya'll are just a bad act

Na Na Na... Not Feelin at all Bro.. sorri

yo i'll give u some adivice,

try n spit about a topic,
DONT TRY N SPIT GANGSTA PLeASE,
try n make ur vocabulary more complex,
try and make ur sentences make sense,
dont just write somthing cuse it rhymes....................

PEACE