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Old 06-02-03, 12:36 PM   #1
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to die for

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mama said if you aint got nothing to live for to find something to die for............................................... ...........................................

ill die over my pride//never gone be disrespected// proad got nothing to hide//my whole life i've invested//ready to die for these streets//my gun has 10 wins and no defeats//i stand strong no retreats//ready for war no hesitation//pull out the 44 no exaggeration//always ready for more until my expiration//death is my destiny//my sins gone get the best of me//even when i die i wont sleep restfully//ill be haunted by demons they gone mess with me//my grandmother said my sins would come back ten fold// so every time i sin i remember what i been told//wont live to get old//but it doesnt bother me//cause i was born and will die in poverty//aint gone be nobodys father cause my father didnt father me//so i have nothing to live for nothing to lose//dont judge me until you walk in my shoes//if this was your life what side would you choose//the left or the right//death or to fight//

You niggas better start living for something or be ready to die for it.
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Old 06-02-03, 12:40 PM   #2
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break up your bars...it's hard ot read like this....this had some hot vocab and i like the intro to it...mamma said...lol....good multi's their def short lines but it had a hot flow...i'd say a 7.5/10


















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Old 06-05-03, 02:14 AM   #3
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had a good flow like artifacts said but yeah dudette you need break up your lines i am going to go blind
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