i cant even help my self when my thoughts become twisted-
i dont even resist it, cause my spirit gets uplifted\ 1
i feel a sense of joy, when i think of gruesome things-
like pickin up a dyin bird, and pullin off each of it's wings\ 2
forgive me if my thoughts sound morbid, synnical, or even unhappy-
but when sick and twisted things come to mind, i feel really happy\ 3
one time my parents made me go to bed early with no dinner-
that night i had a dream i "wore" my moms after i skinned-her\ 4
then i poped out my dad eyes, and used them as ping pong balls-
then i pissed on their bodies, more water than niagra falls\ 5
i woke up the next morning, it was the best mood i ever had-
i had the urge to do what i did to my mom once again to my dad\ 6
some say im sick in the head, but i like to call it "mentally ill"-
every day i come to school like "columbine", im dressed to kill\ 7
one day while in math, i mouthed off to the teacher and she sent me to the dean-
but he also pissed me off, thought about beatin his head harder than a riveting machine\ 8
dont go an call the police, cause i dont carry out my actions-
but one time this girl liked me, it was a "fatal attraction"\ 9
she asked to a date, out on top of "look out point"-
but that bitch talked too much, cut out her tounge and rolled a joint\ 10
no one noticed she was gone, cause she had an identical twin-
her tounge was too thick, had to flatten it with a rolling pin\ 11
you ever seen that movie where the dog gets ripped to smitherines?-
no, you coulnd have seen it, cause i saw that in my dreams\ 12
these twisted thoughts come to me, with a gravitational force-
i have the brain to kill a person, and feel no fuckin remorse\ 13
the world better watch their backs cause im capable of the worst-
i have the taste for blood and im thirsty, its the only thing that's quence my thirst\ 14

uppin for some feedback

DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNN DEEP Shit Playa...................

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i cant even help my self when my thoughts become twisted-
i dont even resist it, cause my spirit gets uplifted\ 1

^^^^^Nice

one time my parents made me go to bed early with no dinner-
that night i had a dream i "wore" my moms after i skinned-her

^^^^^ U fuckin Canibal.....LOOOL Nice shit

these twisted thoughts come to me, with a gravitational force-
i have the brain to kill a person, and feel no fuckin remorse\ 13
the world better watch their backs cause im capable of the worst-
i have the taste for blood and im thirsty, its the only thing that's quence my thirst\

^^^^^^^WOW SIck ENding (but 7up can help you out too remember....LOL)



YO Fam Nice drop Wordplay wus amazing and contend wus tight

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lol, i hate 7up, sprite dawg...... u aint seen the kobe commercials? to be a baller you gotta drink sprite! i hate the fuckin lakers so umch, thx for the feedback dawg.

uppin!

this ahd a good flow....but man there was some fucked up shit in this

lol, i know, this was from RBTL but my opponent no showed so it didnt get any views. sick and twisted thoughts was the topic..... IM NOT FUCKED UP IN THE HEAD YALL!! HAHA

^^^^^^^^^ U NEEEEEEEED HELPPPP>.......................LOL


AND YEA FUCK THA LAKERS I MIGHT SAY IT TOOO IS ALL ABOUT THE NETS baby

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well yeah, but personally im a KINGS FAN BABY! but i HATE THE FUCKIN LAKERS! cry babies

uppin for some feedback yall, plz dont sleep

Nice shit Son i liked it

kings Suck


Lakers Suck

good flow and gangsta........................................... .................................................. ..

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Hey about time i respond to a work of yours after ya did ta mine.

Aight lets see here that was pretty twisted and sick, name was a very good choice but there is nothing wrong with that since you went about and handled it the right way and made it all work out.

Good Drop

R.x Out

I was bouts' to drop one but then i came here and i was like 1 2 ko. Yo, that was heat man. I am a rook so y'all see me up there soon but damn yo that hit was bomb. Basically, that was cracking.

NOT BAD , I'LL BEAT YA THOUGH............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..