Horus

Through Stellar Speech Horus releases a Beast...
while Bleeding bitter Sweets...Judas Tongue Kissin the Cheeks...
Wreaking ugly Diseases unstudied... longeing in Reach...
of the First human Buddy I believe that can Suffer my Peace...
Grungy and Clean...Ironic but Singularly Seen...
I see truths and Lies that Lies Reflectin Ravines...
Yet Unseen...Rave in a Ravenous Righteous Way...
Swaying the Futures using Tarot cards to play Spades...
Casted Away from my Hellish Brigade...
Im a Slave of Human Flesh...the Skeletons my Cage...
Through Pages and Paragraphs Sentences to Words...
Im Staged to Stage the Worst of Vowels Nouns and Verbs...
Now I Verse psalms and Songs Sung from my Palms...
My Fingers administer a Ministers Qualm....
Calm with the Written...Bliss when My Witts in...
My Food For Thought could cure the Malnutritioned....Blah

Saph

They choose to…
Condemn , then commend ,await the war to commence.
a false sense , sweetened pestilence…
beaten suppressed sins hidden beneath a silenced hymn……
And even then , release the beast violence begins…
The children Eve bore, blanketed in sin…banished to the core of this earth dying with in.
I don’t fear death , im through here , death is all that’sleft…
I flew wear Angels wings are kept ,rested where the 7 headed dragon slept..
Gained nothing , but lost it all…hear the voice echoing ,warning it’s the last call…
My mother cried , her children all fell….The land swallowed by the waters, then evaporated into hell…
And still we ignore the signs , the desperate voice that whines dreading the coming times..the churchbell failed to chime…
Watching from behind , the closed windows and shut blinds…a dark lamb straying behind , the flock was lost , the majority is never right…
The clock tocked, hadn’t ticked in some time ,…

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yeah.. I was feelin' the smooth ass flow in this, melodic in a sense... vocab was pretty strong from both, u had the better verse horus but I likes the content of saphs more..

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I like Horus's Style.....................He got Skills........I'm lookin forward to reading more open mics from him.........This collab was Nice..........Both emcees did a great Job.......

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Yo Horus I send u a message In Pm.........Go check it out

that was some hot shit...like bash said i think horus' got skills too...who's saph?

Saph is a chick I know from another Site...

She's pretty nice

I liked it nice flow cant wait to read some more of ya works

Peep My drop 7 Days War and return da favor.

Horus outshone on this, nice flow, vocab was straight, finisher coulda been worded better in my opinion but it was an above average verse, could really of been made longer to make it a better collab, possibly with a hook or something.
Saph's verse wasnt too good, flow was always off point to me, she seemed to be more on the poetic tip that anything else, her bars were stretched and thats what ruined her flow, but other than that, nice content, bring her over to here man, or drop me the sites URL through PM and i'll bring some over. .

Peace!