(Hook):
This is a battle rap//
To smash on you average cats//
Baby rappers here, take your fuckin' rattles back//
(x3)

(Verse 1):

I command respect when another man is steppin'//
I'll stick your head in your ass in under 3 nano seconds//
Blastin' weapons, i'm awesome with curses//
Follow me, try not to get lost in the verses//
I'm spittin' liquid nitrogen to leave some frost on your surface//
Then to thaw you out, you'll get tossed in a furnace//
You wanna get lyrical? Then i'll toss a sharp spear at you//
My rhymes will haunt you like angry troubled spirits do//
Bringing fear to you, to beat me you'll need a miracle//
It's over bitch, i'll dislocate your shoulder quick//
My new style's fresher then a stick of deodorant//
So step up motherfucker! "Uhh who me?"//
Yeah you, i'ma knot your spine like a shoestring//
Crews be steppin' to me, whoa, this dude's mean//
I can tell that you're a bitch by the scent of your pussy//
Push me, then you'll taste the verse of death//
Motherfuckers know that I stay so merciless//
I murder chumps, burst words to burn a bum//
Go ahead and take a breather, 'cuz this verse is done//

(Hook x3)

(Verse 2):

Verse 2, time to finish this cocksucker//
You're the type to rent my fuckin' battle tapes from Blockbuster//
You can not muster the strength to spit it hot, brother//
Think your ill? NEWSFLASH! you're not, fucker//
Busters, step up and get crushed like a beetle//
Then stabbed in the eye with a hypodermic needle//
I'm lethal, strap you to your church steeple//
Then throw grenades at you, 'til your chest is see thru//
I'ma heartless bastard, with hard bars to scar a faggot//
Got a lyrical shotgun, and you're just my target practice//
A passive bitch gets the baddest spits, you're whack as shit//
So who wants to test the emmaculate rhyme catalyst//
'Cuz my lyrics start passin' shit through your system like a laxative//
Then i'll throw you down some stairs, and make it look like an accident//
You'll get so hurt, you'll be living off of aspirin//
Cut your fuckin' head off with a hatchet quick//
I'm the lyrical version of Charles Manson on a bad acid trip//
Baby rappers, watch as this little fetus gets slaughtered//
You couldn't pump up the crowd with a swedish penis enlarger//

(Hook x2)

'Cuz my lyrics start passin' shit through your system like a laxative//
Then i'll throw you down some stairs, and make it look like an accident

Thought this was a decent piece, I like in the beginning how you were using words as actions, that was hot, 2nd verse wasnt as good as the first yet my favorite line was in the 2nd...but overall it was a decent joint...Keep em comin playa

very, hot shit dude, liked your hook, and your rhymes were well writen very nice for la familia it was dope shit! holla @ the_unreal_1

nice as always dawg... uppin' this.. that's the first hook I seen you do I think?.. maybe... lol.. ne-way, uppin' 4 my boy.. don't sleep

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Yea the first verus was better than the second one but overall very nice drop, another good one from the La Familia way to keep it up.

Fuckin ill shit
loved the nano seconds part