wish u niggas wud break down votes rather than "g all the way" an' all that shite, fukin noobs.
*breaks down*
"This nicca Claim-his-an-HeavyWeight...25-1? Thats Ya Record? Right...That’s like Beleiving you in G-unit...
You Fake..nothing Real in BK...you Just an Internet-Textcee..a Wanna Be Rapper who will Never Make-It...//"
riht i think you overdone it here with 'your a wannabe' scene, its been done too often by too many mc's n is basically gettin a bore to read, try work up with your multis in the middle and end, not beginning. Also you want a nice snappy beginning, not something long and without much rhyming as it looses attention.

"So Check-It..you fake E~net-Thug...i'll Snatch-ya-Mouse Pad..cause ya Life only Consist-of-Clicks...
You cant Resist-the-Sticks..you On wood..from ya D.R votes..and now This nigga thinking he can Win with an Wind-resistant-Dick...//(Can you Nope)"
right this one, im afraid was a bit, well on the doaty side, it was meaningless, or maybe too many meanings, but wotever it was it didnt stick well, you want them to fuse together in the one idea atleast, or maybe 2, you had a bit too many...

"Take the Shot-gun-out-ya-Pic..putt’n this Nig.. In mo-heat..than Black-Fans..at a Nazi-Gig...(Gig = Show)
Tripple K's to your Dome..that'll Cross-n-Split ya Wig...it's the Law-of-Newton..the way Im Stuffin-this-Fig...//(Fig Newton)
I Merked-this-Prick...Hurt-ya-Spit...youll never be the Big-Pitcure in B.K..even if ya Stood-next-to-B.I.G..
You to Busy looking at all the Non-vets-you-Did..its Plane-to-me. That you gett’n Murked like JFK-Did...//"
these last 4 lines were wierd, specially 1st one, being that nazis were against jews, not blacks . The second line was aight, not bad meta in it, but you aint gettin any strong punches across. Last two lines were by far the best in your verse, had some punches, more to the point, and an ok finishing line, but you gotta at the end like do everything man, spot on flow, punches, multis, metas, rhyme, everything, you did multis, punches, rhyme, all not bad, but your flow was bit off and there was poor metas.

breaking down G's now, sorry for long post, but pointless going "Joe won cos he ruled this newb ass" etc.......

"you aint voilent, my dick could beat you & its longer than your record put together/
words with no action so you say you as violent as a snake claim your rhyme is slick..but its pure leather/"
now this is more like an opener, nice flow, punches dead on target, bit long i think for first lines, but still the rest made up for it.

"look you can’t match-me-lyrically cause Ill smack-you-literally leave your body floating in water like the statue-of-liberty/
your world will end severed both your arms now you got no girl friend, you like a bulimic patient the way you hurl n bend/"
first line here was ill, very tight, spot on everything. Second was alright, not very strong, but not bad at all still.....

"like shirts with collars, your not allowed in you hood, ill wreck-you-good 'behead' your ass if you mess in this 'neck-of-the-woods'/
Violent is miserable, he has to pay for joy, i 'checked' his rhyme, its not worth a dime..im a teller to make it void/
chop you like loin..you couldn’t touch my text even if you were my paper-boy/"
These were nice, last let it down though, finish with a stronger one, in close battles, the last line often gives you that extra edge needed to win. First two were nice though, could of used them and merked him over all.
Vote: G-Unit