Illl dawg liked every line, it was deep and a great way to reap ya crew, they should be happy to have ya as one of their own.

Thanks man..............uppin

uppin

.....i fuckin def felt this shit..........i can relate.........

Uppin it cause I like it, even if you hate my crew.

yeah yeah...it's good, it's truth...but...

but wat

I like it, its dark and complex. You should think about putting it to audio. Check out: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55464

now i know i haven't peeped you
in a while. i read this. two times...

it is great...you can write from your
heart which is good. up the flow. try
to make the words float, that is my
main problem. you have gained a lot
of respect from me after reading this

sorry about the collab, it will come in
due time. lately i'm really busy....

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uppin

if thats ur best, i would really hate to see ur worst

Lmao^^^^^^............ OK NEWBIE

i was feeling that, how long did it take to write that shit, just curious, mad sick dawg, keep push this shit