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Old 06-07-03, 09:19 PM   #1
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Middleweight Title:[Champ] Martinelli (5-1) vs. fgee (5-2)

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Old 06-08-03, 08:49 AM   #2
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check in........
a title shot......
 
Old 06-09-03, 11:13 PM   #3
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-check in for crook ed-

(he should show.. if not im sorry... he is in the finals of an audio tourny at rnr)
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Old 06-09-03, 11:36 PM   #4
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Im here.. Thnx TiK
 
Old 06-10-03, 12:42 PM   #5
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i'm droppin about 15 lines.......................................
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Old 06-10-03, 02:41 PM   #6
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and just incase u dont show........

ur names martinelli and ur rhymes are smelly
u cant beat me i bounce back like jelly
i'll send a blast of lead right thru your head
see u leakin blood like a sieve slice u up like bread
 
Old 06-10-03, 10:21 PM   #7
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I Kick it off with sumthin fresh, and Then you'll see
That Im Omiting R and E just to F U Gee
Ya fuckin geek, peep his sig with repercussions
Hes about to cry cuz he got cut from a wack Production
And I Love it, This battle is for the belt, but Im not kiddin
When I say your leavin empty handed like folks who got caught shoplifting
I rock kiddies, everyone who read yur shit is pissed
Cuz its like you tried to catch on to a tight style......but missed
Ya prick, I mean your gunna win! So why even bother...
HAHA sike! Sarcasm is just another service I offer
You come softer with Rhymes than Snuggles the Bear
So Im splitting your end like I was Rubbing a Nasty bitches hair
Better Beware, Ive got a movie crew I think you could join
We'll call ya Peter Pans bestest friend, cuz its easy to see ya Lost Boy
 
Old 06-10-03, 10:24 PM   #8
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yo i shit in fools on you
dont give a fuck make a fool out of u
this aint even my battle but im dangerous
your ass is deadly your contagious
 
Old 06-11-03, 03:04 PM   #9
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sorry i been busy with a new job
will post soon as i can
 
Old 06-11-03, 03:25 PM   #10
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^^ you have 8 hours to post....

otherwise I will consider this a no-show
 
Old 06-11-03, 06:03 PM   #11
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Martinelli your pants are fallin down....cos i'm taking the belt
Look closely!.....it's not only his punches that are never felt
U reset the form 10 times before sending.....just delayed wack shit
When i told him to do his spit......he coughed up phlegm the fuckin spastic
Marti tried to think of new ideas.....suffering in writers block
I told him to leave his hood.....but he wouldnt take stock
I was gonna rip you a new asshole.....but u already shit two ways
An equation fo your verse equals......90 percent filler for every cliched punch on the page
The odds are against u (9-3) winning this batle.....i'm about to even you right up
Don't be embarassed and say u don't care....i know u give a fuck
Your punches are like poor bums......cos they never hit home
Like they lost their bearings....and now they're free to roam
Part of tha regime....but your verse was out of order
The + side is it was better than normal.....but it still managed to cross the wackness border

Crook ed and martinelli....1 faggot and two names
at least ur hot now.....u just got shot down in flames


edited for missing words and spelling

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Old 06-11-03, 07:41 PM   #12
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votes...
 
Old 06-12-03, 02:15 AM   #13
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woah. vote crook ed. no competition.
seriously elevate. its hard on rb but
try your best.
maybe next time.
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Old 06-12-03, 02:41 AM   #14
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God theres 1 fuckin vote, how bout we all take example from Phrantik here and learn to vote, this is a fuckin title battle.. sheesh
 
Old 06-12-03, 02:52 AM   #15
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I Kick it off with sumthin fresh, and Then you'll see
That Im Omiting R and E just to F U Gee
Ya fuckin geek, peep his sig with repercussions
Hes about to cry cuz he got cut from a wack Production
And I Love it, This battle is for the belt, but Im not kiddin


^^^ill

And I Love it, This battle is for the belt, but Im not kiddin
When I say your leavin empty handed like folks who got caught shoplifting
I rock kiddies, everyone who read yur shit is pissed
Cuz its like you tried to catch on to a tight style......but missed

^^pretty good....not as ill as the first 2 bars but good...


Ya prick, I mean your gunna win! So why even bother...
HAHA sike! Sarcasm is just another service I offer
You come softer with Rhymes than Snuggles the Bear
So Im splitting your end like I was Rubbing a Nasty bitches hair

^^bah...i didnt like these 2 bars at all really...

Better Beware, Ive got a movie crew I think you could join
We'll call ya Peter Pans bestest friend, cuz its easy to see ya Lost Boy

^^great closer



now fgee...

Martinelli your pants are fallin down....cos i'm taking the belt
Look closely!.....it's not only his punches that are never felt

^^ill

U reset the form 10 times before sending.....just delayed wack shit
When i told him to do his spit......he coughed up phlegm the fuckin spastic
Marti tried to think of new ideas.....suffering in writers block
I told him to leave his hood.....but he wouldnt take stock

^^average....

An equation fo your verse equals......90 percent filler for every cliched punch on the page
The odds are against u (9-3) winning this batle.....i'm about to even you right up
Don't be embarassed and say u don't care....i know u give a fuck
Your punches are like poor bums......cos they never hit home
Like they lost their bearings....and now they're free to roam

^^good besides the last line...that was wack

Part of tha regime....but your verse was out of order
The + side is it was better than normal.....but it still managed to cross the wackness border

^^ok

Crook ed and martinelli....1 faggot and two names
at least ur hot now.....u just got shot down in flames

^^^ played

overall i think that it was a valiant effort Fgee....but Marti edged this one out

vote=Martinelli
 
 


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