look
this is the remix
to my own shit
yup
yo

looking through the depths of my mind and findin nothing/
if i could look upon myself back in the day to find something/
the three part series i made in less than a week 2 months ago/
i never thought i had talent till last stand and first fall came to show/
then i released mediocre things from there on in/
when i posted my first Blackout,it took out the excess rhymes that were in/
then i posted my only classic open mic iv'e ever had/
came out with more hard hitting shit then came to this/
Blackout 2 the remix

I hear alot of rappers are retiring this year/
Jay-Z is quittin the game and what i feared/
Ja Rule won't be missed/
when his next two albums exist/
but my boy DMX is leavin after "Its Not A Game"/
but we had fun while these cats had their reign/
but...i just gotta adress the funniest dudes/
Cash Money is whacker than the bunch of newbie crews/
And G-Unit is back in this game, 50 might not be nice,but stay tru to his game/
21 questions was whack after it got to MTV and BET/
I thought it was creative, no other love song was like 50s/
And B.R.E is takin rapbattles by storm/
the only other crew you can't fuck wit is Warlords/
This is the remix motherfucker the game is stepped up/
ya rhymes are filled wit bigger holes than that of a slut/
This is the remix,we makin it better than the first/
but compare me to you, and find out whose worse/
the best shit gets slept on, my motto for the year/
so if you agree peep B.R.E Presents:[insert deep title here...]

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this was nice.........u was payin yo respect to all the peeps in tha game
i havent read ur first one though,,,,,,,,,,,
but this was good......liked to concept of this one
the first bit needs better vocab but other then that this was dope



please check out my piece caled HOWMANY

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54179

I liked the flow and structure wit this piece...Are Jay-Z and DMX leaving f'real?
~respect~

yup, jay-z droppin the Black Album then hes gone(supposedly) and DMX leavin makin his own albums, but will work on bloodline records.

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