Risen From Within Tha Elysium Of Cyrptic Greek Mythology..
In Seek Of Terminology To Imput Inside Celestial Anthologies..
Terrestrial Anatomically Vitalized From Beyond What Lies..
Exhaulted Above Skies, Tha Utopia From Where I Was Baptized..
Conception Of Tha Eclipse, Wisdom Visualised In Hieroglyphics..
On Dusty Walls Of Gifted, Travel Towards Tha Sands Of Egypt..
To Unravel Tha Mysteries Of Scripts And Enclosed Scrolls..
Tha Evolved Knows, Tha Omniscient Being Banished Tha Pharoahs..
Pantheon Built In Dedication Towards Tha Divine, Occasion..
Of Tha Seraphic And Holy To Re-unite Under One Single Nation..
Derivation Of Incantations By Supernatual August Imitations..
Illustrations Of Sacred Havens, Reassemble Human Motivation..
No Limitation To Anomalous Ability, Agility From Divinities..
In Phenomenal Industries, Nothing Is Within Their Capability..
They Reign Elevated On Tha Hierarchy Of Tha Anti Anarchy..
And Remain Educated Towards Tha Realms Of Tha Antipathy..
Immortality In Banshees, Discharged External To Tha Anatomy..
Enthalpy Exposed Through Atomy, Exertion Like A Battery..
Scattered Free From Tha Structure Of Tha Omnipotent Capacity..
Latent Is My Mastery, Blatent When I Execute My Faculty..
Concucted Between Elemental Particles And Tha Sempiternal..
Hermetic Metrics Set To Tha Correct Heat Of An Eternal..
Nocturnal And Daylight Morality In Divine Heaven Localities..
We Epitomize Tha Inverse Vanity Tied Within Piety Vitalities..
Destiny Is Governed By Consecrated, Axoim's Not Complecated..
Even With Pupils Dilated, Academic Intellects Concentrated..
On Angelic Passageways, Inside Tha Bible And Holy Qu'arn..
Elohim And Allah Share Thoughts, Re-Directed As Psalms..
Olorum Tha Creator Of Civilisation, Within Tha Books Of Africa..
Osirus Tha Son Of Geb, King Of Tha Dead Trapped Inside His Laughter..
Min Tha Arch Of Tha Hereafter, Representing Tha New Kingdom..
Aten Tha Lord Of Earth, Heretic Beyond Egyption Treason..
Anubis Tha Jackal Skulled Noble, Necropolis He Was Chosen..
To Guard And Take Hold Of, Underworld Is Where He Rose From..
Ra Tha Terminal Father Of Gods From Tha Egyption Saga..
But Apathetic I Lay Dormant, N-Demik Tha Supreme Father..

OMG i never knew that N-Demik was That ILL , Damnnnn U got Talent , 4 real , This piece Had Madddd Wordplay , Vocab was nice , This Piece had every single ingredient , Overall u get a 10/10 , Nice drop Dawg

Another ill drop by N-Demik...N-Demik you are a girl right...cause why people call you bro and shit...Also is that your picture?....anyway this had great wordplay and it was bangin

N Demik Is Not A Girl.
And This Shit Was
Dope As Hell. And Is
Taking My Spot Of
Sticky Of The Week

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wow..too somplex for me...i lost track of the deep shit u was saying lol

vocab up the ying yangs its dope yo

This was dope

complex, creative, jus fuckin Dope

I woul have expected nothing less from
Demik tho so, keep dropping Gem's

-One love-

Oh and Bmack How can you think N-Demik
is a girl When his last line is this:

"But Apathetic I Lay Dormant, N-Demik Tha Supreme Father.."

Bet you didnt even read it...........

You are a fucking freak...ENOUGH SAID!!!!

Oh wait..

......Pz.......

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this was a hella original concept, the imagery was great, the multis were subtle and well placed.

and the vocab was completely over the top. i gotta go against the grain, that "i swallowed a dictionary" style makes rhymes harder to read and understand. it reduced the impact of the piece because it didnt flow as smoothly.

otherwise dope.

^^If you've heard him spit, you'd know how he does it ahha...Are you putting it to audio??? It would be FUCKING hard uh....

..........Pz..........

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It would be Kinda Hard , But it wont be hard if u actually kno how to Pronounce da words , Thats why i got too styles of spitting , When i'm doing Text , I use vocabulary , But when I'm doin Audio , I use Kinda Simple But Ill Lyrics

Thanks For All The Feedback..

And No I Wasn't Intending This To Be An Audio...Although Im Pretty Sure I Could Spit It Pretty Easily..

N-demik i tought you well, dont worry you dont have to thank me after every open mic you do....

OMG u mos defiantly, showing all the newbies how text is meant 2 be.

Amazing vocab which i could follow this time
great subject matter
im sure there must of been some metaphors there dug in

Eborted Verdict- A

plz give me some honest feedback at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57908