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Old 06-14-03, 12:13 PM   #1
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So many times you have left me alone
Staying up late untill you come home
Going out on your drinking sprees
Leaving home without me
Time and time I tell you its not fair
For you, my father, not to be there
I needed you in my life
To support me and your wife
She tries to stand by your side
Always down for the ride
She builds her life around your ways
Even when you go out drinking for days and days
Shes always there with me, waiting your return
But inside, My love for you as a father, no longer burns
My heart aches, I wish you would do right
And stay home by our sides at night
Your never there for me to talk to
I could never put my trust in you
You never listen to what I say
I just want us to be a family, and you to stay
I no longer want to be a part of this
To much of my life you make me miss
I'm tired of tying to make you see
How you are breaking down this family
All of our memories are waisted
and my love for you has turned to hatred

Kinda boring..but tell me what u think...

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Old 06-14-03, 01:23 PM   #2
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Nice drop girl............i like how u put this one down. I could see the emotion in this one.........nice
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Old 06-16-03, 03:05 PM   #3
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Thank you...I appreciate you reading it. I put alot into writting and comments like your give me more confidence Thankz...

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