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06-17-03, 12:12 PM
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Yo Check Out My Audio and Tell Me What Ya Think
IP: B20F 67F7
I ain't that good at mixin so don't hold that against me
here it is listen to "Just Da Facts" and tell me what ya think http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/rhymemastamusic.htm |
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06-17-03, 03:14 PM
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IP: 0E9F EF27
Yo guy it aint even about your mixin mayne...u mumblin and whisperin guy... another man that reminds me of blair witch project ...cmon man u gotta put energy into it, mic presence/
Plus ure rhymes are pretty simple..take time writin ure shit and u gotta at least try to flow decently... but yo dont take this as a diss. im juss givin u something to start workin on.. keep writin and rappin and recordin everyday... where did u get this beat |
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06-17-03, 03:26 PM
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IP: 6387 1717
Ye I know I got stuff to work on. Gotta take constructive critiscm and try to fix it. I got the beat off of Kazza
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06-17-03, 08:05 PM
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IP: B4AC 694E
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mom and dad home? why u whisperin...and the beat is there for a reason......use it
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06-18-03, 07:57 PM
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IP: F696 5A3D
Damn I had My Stereo At Full Blast...Maximum Volume..And I Still Couldnt Hear U!!! Lmao Nah It could of Been Better...Keep Workin Kid... Holla Back
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06-18-03, 08:19 PM
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IP: D27D 0B18
it sounds like u readin man... put A LOT more emotion into it... u needa work on some of ur production to... cuz some parts are louder.. then some parts u cant hear shit... keep workin kid u'll get better, juss take these feedbacks as advice and not disses
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06-18-03, 08:54 PM
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
yeh man step up your voice, btw I have the same beat
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06-18-03, 11:32 PM
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peepin
IP: 5652 506A
ya freestyle is shorter then that vern mufucka that playd minnie me...JUS DA FACTS(about your audio): u jus readin paper you got no energy at all man u hear that beat in the backround??? use it no disrespect at all but think hard when u rhyme about why your rhymin in the first place
and if u flow like that dont talk bout ladies n the club...talk about shit u know n shit u are......dont be HARD BE REAL son i jus speak my mind so dont take it personally |
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06-19-03, 10:47 AM
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IP: 8380 B7C3
oh shit i didnt listen to your freestyle mayne./..its short but sall good that beat is so dope ....u probly got it off of kazaa too lol
I dont know if you knew but its a beat from this rap group called "Iam" they got crazy beats man juss search for -iam instrumental- in kazaa youll find good quality beats!!!! |
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06-19-03, 12:48 PM
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IP: A10D 4933
Aight I read what yall said and got in a freestyle battle heres da link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58863
or if ya just wanna listen to da freestyle here that http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/rhymemastamusic.htm it called Freestylevs. JustNice tell m what ya think and if I improved at all. Thans for the tips yall peace |
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