Done in ten mins so isn't tha longest but would like some feedback please.West's Thoughts

If ya fuck with west yer gonna have to protect ur chest wit a disinfectant kevlar vest/
coz there's nothing more i detest than a busta that doesn't know that he can be executed at ma request/
do not respect me jus let ma lines and rhymes infect and flow through ur bloodline like a needle that will inject/
when i'm on tha mic i come correct,no need for bodyguards to protect coz ma punches comin to noses direct/
i'm a lyrikal messiah that has a somewhat complicated flow,don't do hard drugs but i do smoke blow/
i aint been in tha rap game long but no one can say i'm slow,winnin every battle and race and always tha fastest off tha mark after ready,set,go/
alls i'm tryin to do is gain a lil credibilty,but it's hard on this site coz no one judges u on ur ability/
theres alot of dikryders and haters on that should be banned,fuk it they all gettin scorched by ma heat so they are easily recognizable coz they tanned/
anyways back tha real topic which is me,i'm already an accomplished mc and everything u want and may never be/
i come from a place that most peeps don't know where it is on tha map,it's Scotland in tha UK and i'm tryin ma best to get it recognition for rap/

i liked this
real gutter

s'ight West, im surprised

uh, 2-3-4on1 isnt ur style,

shorten ya lines if u wanna use a 2-3-4 on 1 scheeme itll flow beter

other than that im surprised

Jus tryin to mix hit up if ya know wot i mean,jus tryin to find ma true flow.

Peace

yea, listen to Tech, then listen to dre, then to bizzare and see what u relate to, i always related to Tech, but i battle like bizzare would rap

i've always felt proof actually or cannabis coz i like long bars,this may sound corny but i can spit like em a lil,u know continuin on for ages without really pausin or breathin but i'm jus experimentin with different shit,Feel me.

Peace

Yeah well I listen to Tech N9ne
Q-strange- Jim Reaper
Bad-mind-
Majjik Duuce
Rottin
Necro and the Goons
Non Phixion
Ill Bill

thas my inspiration

i aint heard of some of them so i'll check them out,Yo uppin this peeps.

Peace

Really i dont think you would like any of em at all
There Ahh how do we say Real Gory and Gruesome
All they do is rap about they lives and how they'd like to kill people
And bein poor as fuck too

yo i'll check them out anyways i can be a lil dark sometimes.

Peace

listen to Krayzie Bone....any thing solo from him......

thats my inspiration

I'm more of a Bizzy fan but i'll l0ok into it dawg.

Peace

yo i didnt know they rap in scotland but that shit was ill and you enlightened me that niggas be rapping everywhere