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06-18-03, 01:04 PM
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BANNED For Being A Dick
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GrimeY
IP: CEC2 D817
I slit throats with thin strokes
I twist hope make kid's choke on big ropes I'm sick, dope..exert energy like twin Cokes being shaken and having their tin broke... your casket calls you're fortified with plastic walls I've outlasted all 12 times more toxic than a dozen of acid balls make you fuckin bastards fall pop you like massive claws grabbing a basketball it's crazy.....how I like splitting atoms just by staring at 'em I'm unfair like God making Eve bleedonce a month, but sparing Adam I'm smacking Misters and scaring Madams I'm tearing blaring cannons time traveled and stole your parents talent... The sparing Adam Line we take our own share from the Hunnies |
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06-18-03, 01:06 PM
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IP: 2B23 543A
liked it,flowed well.
Peace |
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06-18-03, 01:14 PM
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IP: 44B7 B6C4
it was an aight peace, the flow was good but you need more levation in it.
peep mines called The Skitzo:me vs. me
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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?! |
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06-18-03, 01:19 PM
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BANNED - Pink Slipped
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IP: 92B1 0496
yea dog, elevation is the key
it flowed well, the splittin atoms line was good, the rest could have been better make ur lines even, at leest 13 sylables per line, perfect line is 13-16 |
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06-18-03, 01:22 PM
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IP: 798E 1507
yo i was feeling the creativity though a different style of flowing
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06-18-03, 01:23 PM
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BANNED For Being A Dick
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IP: CEC2 D817
Need to change Hip Hop
peep dis multifarious complex ascap prototypes; priceless copywrites arrayed like dolomites. solidified with slave ship packed molecules; neurocells needed like h2o supermodel fuel. bullseye target practice at the synapse. robin hood accuracy with no relapse. *subliminal message: i don't give a fuck if you don't understand this* taps eulogy every so often, for weak thoughts in coffins. virtual woodgrain finish in this matrix, churned by the nanometallic generatrix... |
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