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Old 06-18-03, 08:20 PM   #1
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first off, lets make it clear, i hate your guts/
you used me, now its time for me to take my stuff/
and leave, should've known you for a headfuck, i was blinded/
every word you said was lies, i was blind-sided/
the disrespect was amazing, i stood stunned/
how you put me in the role of a jealous husband/
his wife cheating, you wanted me to kick your ass/
i nailed the fuckwit one time, feeling sick too fast/
and then i screamed, saw the shock on your face/
prolly took for a wimp, when he locked up in the first place/
nothing but obcenities spilling from my mouth/
and nothing but apologies, next time you called out/
i'm getting messages, you begging me to come back/
you've got the wrong guy bitch, i aint a dumb twat/
even saying, it your fault i should've hit you instead/
put a brick to your head, "i dont hit women" i said/
wonder why they call you bitch? i'll tell you this/
coz the guy you turned down realise the hell they missed/
you're a liar, throwing excuse, next you're telling me/
all your problems revolve around your sexual identity/
i got problems aplenty, i dont blame it on my straightness/
you scared of solid relationships like you're weightless/
dont wanna be tethered down, but its stormy weather now/
and you asked me to be together that wasnt very clever now/

first draft, gonna make this an audio, what you think?
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Old 06-18-03, 09:16 PM   #2
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Old 06-18-03, 09:26 PM   #3
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this was descent
i dunno not to much more i can say
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Old 06-18-03, 11:47 PM   #4
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wow, 2 replies and both of them completely pointless. uppin^^
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Old 06-18-03, 11:54 PM   #5
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This Was Cool...I Was Feelin It...I Give You A 7/10...

Do A Brotha A Favor n Check Out My "Untitled" Open Mic
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Old 06-19-03, 04:41 AM   #6
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nice piece playa..................i felt this............good flow......just keep it up....

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