The Passion I feel for her
nothing i can explain
if man fears what he can't understand
then around her i feel no pain
I don't understand her, nor the things she does
I can't see the realness we had in our love
she went out and she found another man
yet she came back running back to me
and i had different plans
I see the fire in her eyes, as they are so beautiful
The flame of thy love comes from whats inside
and if we had such a good relationship then why did you hide?
I saw how you are trying to come back to me
thought that i would have open arms for you
but if i remember correctly you told me all the hate
you had in that heart,when i found out you was cheating
i was modest for once in my life for a relationship
and you saw it and you come breakin it
if this how you want to treat me
like im nothing, but a worthless object,and something you thought you could come back too
then you are wrong because i see right through you
and i see things i don't like
you thought i only wanted your fruit while it was ripe
but how, then would you run back to me
all of a sudden rejoicing like im holy

if you ever wanted to hurt me while im down now is your chance
but you lost it in the last ten seconds
because the anger rose up, not the hulk could compare
I swear
If i'd see you again i don't care
Id lash out and blast you in the streets
only wit words cuz only cowards use heat
the transition that i made while you were gone
because my rage exploded like a time bomb
now you had your chance i was modest for once in my life
when i truly believed you would be my wife
but then i caught you and you ruined my life
now its my turn, and can you feel my vibe?

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

im pretty new 2 poems myself but i liked it...but there was this i didnt like......

if man fears what he can't understand
then around her i feel no pain

you cud have used that better......"u feel no pain"...meaning what...that u do or dont understand her...sorry i just cudnt get it...u shud of said that u do or dont fear her if u get me...i KNO its wordplay just...i think u cud have used it better...

but it was nice man......wanna see more......1

eh man i felt ya peom - wordpalay was too tyte

can't wait to read more to come

da hunnet