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Old 06-19-03, 12:30 AM   #1
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If I could take away your sorrow, I would cast it to the wind...
If I could say its okay, you will never cry again...
If I could wave my hand, I'd wave away your fears
You would never have to worry as long as I am near
If I could take my brush I would paint a perfect day
If I could muster all my creativity I would say the perfect phrase.

The words that I will say will only go so far
They're just ordinary words from an ordinary heart
Just an ordinary love from an ordinary girl.
But I know someones whos greater.
I know someone who loves u more than I.

If I had it my way, I would ride thru the night...
Like a prince in shining amour, I would love to see the fight.
And I would love to be ya hero whom you've never had before.
I would be the one to rescue you...
I would be the one u call...
But there is one who is much more than I can be.
And if u put your faith in him you would have security

The words that I will say will only go so far
They're just ordinary words from an ordinary heart
Just an ordinary love from an ordinary girl.
But I know someones whos greater.
I know someone who loves u more than I.

Though I love u with all of my heart-
It will only go so far
He will love u when ur right or wrong
even if ur weak or strong..
He loves you more than I

I know no greater love....
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Old 06-20-03, 12:59 PM   #2
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its was an all right drop started off better then it ended thou just keep pumpin and check my shit
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Old 06-20-03, 02:00 PM   #3
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nice drop 1st stanza deffinetly sent out a message, but wen u got to last of 3rdd stanza u put a twist on it and carried it on thru last stanza. im confused by tha twist. r u a friend showin ur love to another friend and also tellin her she has a closer love to u??? e.g like u love her as a friend but he loves her as partner/soul mate/ lover ??
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