first to 5 votes.. heres his verse tehn mine..

fuck it, ima spit cuz u takin too long,
i get impatient wit dis shit like when im watchin a hoe take off her thong/

it aint worth it for you to even come on dis battle,
after my lyrics pierce through your body, it'll make your intestines rattle/

SWITCH STYLES

your shit is soft-spoken, dat aint a good thing,
your coward ass gets excited when you hear a telephone ring/

let me ask you one thing, do you consider yourself a pimp?,
well fools like u dat TRY to rap are recognized very simp-le/ (simp= loser, simple...)

are all of your rhymes as bad as da ones on rb,
or are you tryin to infest dis place by bein a bad MC/

you had 18 wins at dat otha site,
did dem niggas u battle actually kno how to read and write?/

well dis battle is killed, so i shoudl end it right herr,
my rhymes are astonishin to fake mcs's like you, like chingy, dey make u "sturr"/

this is my verse.

u called dat a verse that shit is below average/
ill break ya legs like hearst u just fuked wit a savage/(Garrison hearst)
this battles goin to be tragic leavin u scard 4 life/
how was i suppose to no your a bitch pakn a knife/
ill strangal u wit ya ice my flows strike u like thunda/
step to me an ill leave ya body lyin 6 feet unda/
so stop spittin this so called hardshit while im blastin/
your verse is best friends wit the garbage basket/
i drop boms sent from yo pops sadam cappin/
these so called opponents these messures goin to be drasstic/
my spits are fully equiped like sonets to leave ya head disconected/
severed from the rest of u.. next words out of your mouth goin to be best of 2/

x pos already voted on teh previos thread an the mod said i can keep that vote..but purple if u want ya vote to count u gotta do it again..sorry thats just wut teh mod said..

UPPIN

iight then, my vote goes to mak just because of the punches........................................... ............................

mak def got him in the punches for real, and maks flowed better. so thats who got it in my opinion

Vote~Mak

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foreal thanks fo day feed back.. stil uppin for my first win..
already got my first lost..from sumone who i no cheated on dem votes..cuz his flow was garbage.....
UPPIN FOR MY FIRST WIN an K o

Both rappers really dident give it much, I mean it was another new person battle, but Mak was less like a new person, better punches, little bit better flow to.

Vote-Mak

coo..is that how u see ying..cuz i dont..thanks for da vote tho..i aint a new person to this game..
Uppin for 2 more votes an i can get on my next victim..

yall kats go vote on my battle at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1986#post551986


iight thx,
holla

eh if u wanna vote this is where it needs to be done.. homie.. so preacher vote here..if u want it to count..

Vote Persian
I liked his flow better and I enjoyed his lyrics
Makavelli needs to elevate with some more mature rhymes, he was good, but with practice he will be better
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really dawg thats how u see it..hmm that makes sense how everyone else voted for me.sayin my shit was better but hey im up .....r u sure u aint friends wit persian playa u cud be one of his bitches..

Uppin..

vote def goes to mak..thas my homeboy..haha, right???..
aight, good shit mak..never knew u could flow like that..def impressive
peace