I sit here and think of the days gone by//
pinching the inside of my checks trying not the cry//
i told myself along time ago//
that no matter what i would hold in all this sorrow//

As i flip through old pictures that i kept locked away//
i remember how this young girl's smile lightened my day//
she use to run around with out a single care//
with little brown curls just like her dad's hair//

We knew from day one she'd be a magnificent star//
but for now she'd stick to stepping on those little blobs of tar//
A true drama queen right from the start//
bealting out made up songs from her little gold heart//

If asked a year ago what life would be without my little sweet-tart//
i wouldnt even be able to start, shes my whole life she owns my whole heart//
She spent every dark night with me cuddled in bed//
I'd lay there and pray to god to bless every curled hair on her head//

Maybe god didnt hear my many prayers to keep her under his wing//
because the doctor informed me that no longer was i going to hear her sing//
she had an estimated one year left of life//
and there was nothing to save her not even my own life//

That last ten months and a half we did everything together we were never apart//
it was the last time that i had everything around that filled my heart//
we did everything we wanted no questions asked at all//
even made our own record titled "the rise of an angel in fall"//

Forever and always this bubbly little girl will have a great chunk of me//
and every night of my life i will be found dreaming of her just sitting on my knee//
Shes the one who taught me all about love//
Shes the one who will be there waiting for me when i too make my journey to up above...

This is for Nyla my daughter who passed away at the age of 2

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come on lookin for some comments advice whatever you feel like saying dont let this chick down i wanna here it

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wow this was really nice...well i dont like it coz its true but i mean it had a lot of emotion and im sorry it happened...my son was recently born and the thowt of that is why i liked this so much...the only thing i thowt was weird was

f asked a year ago what life would be without my little sweet-tart//

im from UK and tart means like slaggy lol.....unless u ment sweetheart...i iono

but this was very good......wanna see more

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thx lol sweet-tart for me here is more like a nick name you use for some1 you have great feelings for like honey ect.

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keep the replies coming pls ppl

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hey sweet thang this was off the hinges....for u being s newb that was tyte
i could tell you put some time and effort in this piece and for that i know you will create some magic ,,,,,
can't wait for more!!

holla at me ma

eyo baby .... check my latest out please - tell me what u think

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58912

thx keep uppin this shit

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uppin anyone?

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filed that really touched me, I am so sorry you had to live through that. I have a little girl, seven years old, and she is my life force, I do not think I would be as strong as you, if I were in your shoes. I got a lump in my throat just reading your words. I can tell you loved your little girl very much. I am so glad you got to make a song together, is there anyway we can hear it. Well I will surely include you in my prayers tonight, take care and stay strong, even thougyh I don't know how you can. Much respect and my deepest sympathy. God bless you and your daugter...

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FUCKA BABYLON BANDIT!!!

nice piece you wrote, alot of emotion, i can tell you put alot of time into this piece, i enjoyed the read.

makes me wana put effort into my poetry.

i can't even explain how much this touched me man
i don't have children cause im still a child but i can sympathize
for you, i felt bad reading it and i felt bad now but this is really deep
man, but man, she's in a better place right now dog...........
.....................................i feel you man.....God bless....my love and
his love goes out to you....
Peace

thx all sorry bounce its just a little casette with like two songs one it of her but im not bout to put it out on the internet
keep uppin

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decided to put this up again because ive made some new changes to it since then. its about a year old now, but its still my favorite piece, looking for some replies.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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