she left me, i'm all alone
it came out of no where, like a cyclone
i wish i could take back all those things i said
but i can't, so i'm here posting on this thread
with all this comotion, why do i feel so wrong
can't show emotion, gotta be strong
i know somehow, this was all my fault
wish i were locked away, in a lead vault
i can never do anything right
inside of me, anger always seems to ignite
always trying hold it back
sometimes i just can't, and i gotta attack
hurting people that i don't want to
causing carnage, always scared of what i'll do



again it's short, but whatever
say what ya want

the rhyme's were tight, length was fine, rythm was good too keep up the good work

peace

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