I posted this on a diff site, just felt like posin it on here...please leave feedback, or at least rate out of 10....

I spit eternal darkness, leave you "toothless" when "darkness falls"...
Spittin intricate tragic schemes, to bash emcees, with extractive beams, and in fact defeats, u depend and lean, leave tragedies...
Your style is fake but thats my opinion, call me the lyrical minion, mind of a wise indian, ur brains in a death trap when i begin to rap and start riddlin'...
I have the "golden -eye," the way I leave ur brain "Bond-ded" like "double" comrehensive " O's" ahead" 7" mis-understood...(When u comprehend something , u tend to say "oh" instead of 7 who don't understand, forming 007)
Leave u deadly in "disease", alive to choose your "asthmetic" "coffin"(coughing), ur decision metal or wood...
Ineffectful body and spirit, everytime wack emcees spit lame lyrics, i spit back with loud complexity so u can hear-it...
Punchez and multies is all i spit, i do it with difficulty and lyrical characteristics...
Consider this, a master spit, with an extractive diss, with an elastic twist, unexpected tricks, and tragic hitz...
I spit ultimate rhymes, read the "clock" backwards, claimin that u can "rewind time"...
Ultra fastest, my rhymes are classics, untouchable tactics...
I rhyme with catasrophes, and with massive beats, my style is rappin streets, leave reactive heat...
I flow with stylish up's, nuttin but lyrics-not ridin on dubs, thinkin this is ill, just warmin up...

Ay dats tight. And welcome to site. Check my shit out and see if u like it.

Upin for sum feedback.....1

fuckin upin for feed...

Cool Drop Dawg...Welcome To Tha Site

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This is a dope sig.

Can ya be more descriptive, but good look on the feedback dunny, fuckin upin...

you want feedback nigga, here it is............

the multies combined to run back and forth with your punchlines
i.e mult, punchline, multi were good and ckept my attention to read.

vocab-8.5
flow-9
punchlines-9
multies-7.5
overall-8.5

score-8.75=tight shit,

now check out my newest shit and give some real feedback too nigga..............

ps, my shit's called "the closest to you"

good look on the feedback, uoin for sum feed...