20 line limit (10 Bars)
no hate votes
no crew votes
no editing the post with your rhyme in it
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man i'll spitt asap

i'm gon enjoy this battle

n respect to u reppin yak killa kadafi n 2pac

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COMPLEX MANTHRAX, dont brethe cos i'm airborne like anthrax

look at me for perfection, lil nig cant even get an erection, aint even started puberty, n spitts freestyle in my community.

man your a lyrical draw back, cut the crap, dont even show up with your rap

the day is for suckaz n tonight u bleed, i'll put u in a bong n smoke u like weed

Utilalize lessons learned from my childhood years, leave u begging in the cemetery in tears

what do u think this is the matrix reloaded, this freestyle will leave ur pride burnt and corroaded,

you dont have an identity, another kid str8 out of elemetery, leave ur body dead smelling for a century

your like snoop dogg getting his bone, str8 up in micheal barrymores home,

u told the kids u was oliver cos u wanted more, fag like graham naughton found dead on the floor its time for post mortom

i'll drop u like a bad habbit, shoot for fun like u was a rabbit

ur turn to spitt, here's the mike come quick n grab it

remember the rules n ----------NO FEEDING----------- cos ppl who do end up bleeding

GOOD LUCK HOME BOI

i been waiting for you to drop for so long i wrote my verse,,, so here it is dawg....

I’ll upset ya balance like a bird on ya tightrope///
My styles so dark that you need to use a night scope///
You’re on a slope sliding down and your brakes ain’t working///
My tonsil-ability makes fun of the responsibilities you’re shirking///
You’re just a blade of grass and I’m the lawn mower///
I’ll cut you down to size and next week I’ll start over///
I’m compared to Lloyd Banks from Newcastle to Sicily///
The only Banks YOU’RE compared to... is Hilary///
I’m fresher than the prince so don’t make me laugh son///
You throw a thin line so I throw back a phat one///
Your shit is slack; I’ll stab you in the back with a knife///
Your whole rhyme is lies… you add-lib ya life///
I’ll take ya rhyme book and tear it into pieces///
Chew it up, digest it, and turn it into faeces///
Your vocab is flat buts its okay I creased it///
When I kill you you’ll finally find out what deceased is///
Your lucky you’re far away, that’s where you wanna stay///
You damn right that’s a ‘free’style who the fuck would wanna pay?///
I come different every time like the start of The Simpson’s///
I’m a Family-Guy like Homer and you’re just little Lisa bitchin’///

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that was good @ manthrax but what was that part about the simpsons i just didnt feel it. n what happened to no feeding of my sh#t dawg ?

COMPLEX_MANTHRAX got this in my eyes, like tha punches and layout also tha floh better, i'll be back to poll it once i get 100 posts,.,.........................

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manthrax got this by far
Souljah wus up wit bitin off of pac homie
That's a herb move
But manthrax was better by far

my vote=u know

Hit this battle up wit a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61754

how could i feed off your verse?? i writ that just before you posted,,, AND EVERY TIME THE SIMPSONS STARTS THERES DIFFERENT THINGS HAPPEN LIKE WHAT BART WRITES ON THE BLACKBOARD AND THE WAY THEY ALL RUN TO THE COUCH IS DIFFERENT EVERY EPISODE...

ok first off, stop bitching COM cuz hands aint no fucking herb!!!, next to him you look like the herb so watch wat u fucking do

ok now to vote
battle ur verse was just plain i mean its like lementary style crap,it really wasnt dat good, COM's was more complex and was wayy better structed and he had better punches


my vote=COM

uppin.......................come on we need more votes,,, if peeps want favors returned in the form on an honest vote then just leave your link in your vote post......................................

complex took this, souljahs verse was weak, his only punch was ill smoke you like weed and that was played about 20 years ago....

plus he bit a line off pac

Utilalize lessons learned from my childhood years, leave u begging in the cemetery in tears

^^^^bittin off pac......

vote = complex

return the favor with an HONEST vote....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61759

yo COMPLEX_MANTHRAX u said come here and vote on yo shit and u'll hit mine up witta polll...well dawg i already hit yo shit up.....so drop a poll at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=3

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NICE BATTLE. lemme break it down.

punches: complex BY FAR
flow: tie
metas: complex
creativity: complex

my vote: complex

ps.- battle soulja, yo punches are played like crazy