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Old 06-28-03, 01:44 PM   #1
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"fuckin assholes today".....

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Don’t walk in my face like you know how im livin
Saying shit behind my back about me and my siblins
I’m just tryin ta keep it good between us,buts you keep on lippin
And talkin like its all true,when all your doin is fibbin
Giving me new reasons ta right new disses and continue rippin
People like you, who cant fuckin mind-they-own
Get inta other peoples buisness cause they cant find-they-own
Why the fuck cant you continue walkin by-and-be-gone
Don’t look at me all prissy and happy
Then turn around and laugh and act-mean
I fuckin hate that bullshit,dont pull that shit with-me-bitch
Everything you say is reloaden my empty-clip
So keep on senden-that-shit,just remember,im the one who be enden-it-bitch
I didnt start-this,i just want it ta harvest,and watch it finish
I dont want it ta be squashed and demonished
I enjoy pinnin you down ta the ground,it makes me laugh and beginin grinnin
Your just funny little humans usen feelins as your humour
So why the fuck cant i do-it,it amuses him so why cant it amuse-her
It can amuse the whole world,so let the cruelity prosper,huh,lets forget the gospel
I’d rather sit back,laugh and talk-bull,and gossip
I’d rather rock rap,heavy metal and mosh-pit,ha-bitch?
Don’t that sound like the world we livin-in,all this sinnin-and grimmy-hands lookin for dividends
Doesn’t it,arnts you loven-it?everyones the same,no ones dividant
Everyone’s no longer differ-ent,we breakin gods covenant
We’re covered-in sin,whenever someone looses,we rub-it-in,and shove-it-in
They face untill they sufferen and slit they rist over this bullshit
Take ur dick and force-it inside of a bitch,and rape her at fourteen
We’re all use ta the court-scene,so mnd-as-well see it again,thats the only reason we report-heat
We laugh at the broken down souls that we see on Jessie and Maury
We watch people be scorched-and-bleed,and we sit back like "i feel sorry-for-him"
When you aint doin shit but reading another story,-thats-it
You aint getten off ya sorry ass and helpin-kids
You just talk,you know,mouthen-shit
You aint about-shit,if you were in that situation u wouldnt amount-ta-shit
Wouldn’t even know how ta count-and-shit
You’d be bound-ta-hit the floor-and-die,and now you act horrified
Fuck you and fuck everyone like you,i hope you become poor-and cant survive
I’d just laugh like you did,and spit on you like you did ta the broken down youth
And use-it as an excuse ta hate you and show you abuse
And that’s it,I just hope when this happiness you cant continue…..and that’s it
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Old 06-29-03, 12:21 AM   #2
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nice shit

i'm a man of many words, lol
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Old 06-29-03, 07:12 AM   #3
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This was Nice dawg, Although try to sue some Intersyllable rhyming, but still it was nice...You tried to put multis in there too which helped the flow!

Overall:7.5/10, Keppe elevatin!
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