still flowing....i stay moving ahead while you stay behind-
the SECOND you get a THOUGHT off your mind-
would of already be given BRAIN for the second time-

THESE BOMBACLAUDS IS FUBAUGE-
i stay killen rhymes MURDER wordbase-add to the RATES-
like econo lodge-
on mic's you a clone with another name like chrysler and dodge-

who am i? the m.c.- that spits till he dry heaves-and cant breath-like he had his lungs squeezed-
beat...beats off loose leafs to free speech my FRee style cost you to bleed-im the drug you thugs need-cause you couldnt get a crowd hyped up if you handed out xtacy and speed-

if i say im the illest~im just being modest- shit im being just honest-but you claim to be the hardest- only because you fantasize the VISUALIZE of my DICK SIZE no wonder you made your career being choke artist-

i stay bustin- punchlines that cause concussions-make you look like a nazi mixed with black russian-then leave you riding a glass dick like WHITNEY'S husband-while the crowds in shock like porn tapes of the pope cussin-while raping his own cousin-

the WARLORD-snore-when you touch the mic chord- cause your styles a bore- you got no delivery plus your rhyme FOCUS breaks down more- than a FORD-

rip ya-send you to hell on acapell gopsell scriptures-in mixture-
hand you defeat then air it on a theater screens so you get see the big picture-

stay me-but who are you to M.K.C- from now till infiniti-remix THE SYMPHONY-play the ORGAN on beat and rip you per ARTERRY-

assualt the word battery-my rhymes so fat the doctor warned me to limit my inticake of calories-

eh,escuchastes que esta pasando su cavrones? es la invasion. primero aqui mana todo!

uppin

uppin

OKAY I GUESS THIS DIDNT MAKE THE CUT

i liked that ryhme definitly got some nice catchy flow uppin for sure

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tight fosure, exspect nothin less from u, shit made the grade man, but cats sleep, all they ever do is up their own work all day,,,, diss shit was worth the read and i loved this.....on mic's you a clone with another name like chrysler and dodge- ....,,,, that was quality,,,,,,

THNKS

This was aiight, it flowed good but at the same time your lines seemed wordy and jumbled up and it kinda gives of the feel of just babbling. Creativeness was o.k. with a couple slick lines but this was average

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AIGHT I FEEL THAT

"then leave you riding a glass dick like WHITNEY'S husband-while the crowds in shock like porn tapes of the pope cussin-while raping his own cousin-"...

lmao, that shit's funny as fuck man.... it wasn't your best rhyme, and I'm in WL now, so I didn't much like that diss.. but whatever, it's beef from before i joined.. lol.. nice piece cous.

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PAPA I AM IN WARLORDS IT WAS NO DISS tell me what seamed to lack

ok...............wORD aLWAYS PERFECT on oPEN mICS.......

THIS ONE WUSNT YO BEST DAWG BUT AM FEELIN THE RHYMIN SHEME...AND CONTEND SICK SHIT......BUT COULD HAVE DONE BETTA.....................FAM....

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I thought this was sick. Some lines were kinda sketchy and I had to read 'em a few times to get ya, but overall the punchlines were good, and I thought it had originality. Peace...

UPPIN