philosophic topics common when I drop hotness
modern ebonics, it's still english but wit' extra topings.
I sing this, totally honest, I'm the calmest, I'm tha rawest..
you can't stop this, on a constant I come with scripts that uplift
I guess it's a gift, the physics of my rap nature
I lack tha nack ta act gangsta, I'm a pranksta
leave ya in danga from the way my lyrics flood tha gates of the industry
you need intalect to ever expect to get into me, or feel the heat
I connected once, that's it, I'm indescrete
no longer in tha street, I gave up that life to injure beats
I murder tracks, y'ain't heard-a raps with this kinda delivery
I got a special package, un-wrap it, stick ya-hand in
a vortex forces your focus, your mind opens for it.
the voices chokin' your concience, a life expendable, it understandable
when you comin' with hundreds of phonetic decibles
my scripts un-dressable, there's no cover-up no scandals
I just say it an' if you can't handle my samples you have ample oportunity to learn
achieve imunity, it's your turn...

<<HOOK>>
these my physics
my genetic composure
surround you with a phonetic enclosure
I'm tha ebonetic enforcer

my words absurd'll baffel your chapel with every verb
your minds sanctum'll be in shambles when I ramble on in every verse
like a deadly curse I swerve thru superior curves
delerious at first, curious is the next serious thought to cross my psyche
I might be the only one in the game this enlightning
it's frightning, all my life I been writing suprising scibings
either rhymes or epiphany's it sickens me
how I can take six of these so called "sick" emcees and instantly leave 'em shivering
and this is just my scribbling riddling your little brains
am I really this insane, I must be to ask myself
answer as well, like cancer I swell, spread and send you "back-up dancers" straight to hell..
how can you debate this pictoral display of greatness through fallacy
and how can these fleets of meek people be so eagre to challange me
they playin' on a high wire balance beam, strayin' from they anti-talent team
gallantly I reach out an' ceizea thousand dreams and schemes for you to read
my aparition consumes ya need, take heed this is more than greed, or green with envy
you don't wanna be my enemy...

<<HOOK>>

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not done yet, I'll keep adding as the day goes on... can I get some feedback so far

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holy shyt........... you like to spit like tha huh? me too..
please peep my shyt i wrote down called *****yo peep*****

4 real i think we could be a phat tag-team

cool yo.. uppin!

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nice yo too tight 4 wordz

delerious at first, curious is the next serious thought to cross my psyche
I might be the only one in the game this enlightning
nice as fuck^^^

thx dawg.. yo check your pm's

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Yo man, that shi' is tigh'! Ya wanna give me some feedback on mine? It would be greatly 'prieciated...

"Real Life"- Gangsta One
"Go Gangsta on the Bitch"- Gangsta One
"Comin' Afta Ya"- Gangsta One

Thx dawg

all I'm gonna say is it's tight or it sucks becaus eof your lack of insight here.. but thx ne-way..

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tight work, had it all mostly their, ur are deffinatly one of RB's better emcee's n it shows in all ur work,,,, but mainly u aint no texter, ur an aud boy that shit jumps out at me fosure, but u put ya lines down right n noobs n vets alike can feel it.... good work keep on it.

thanx dawg, respect.. it's taken like 3 years to get to this level and I still got a long way to go...

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This was pretty good, kinda like a open fire battle rap and you where able to pull it of and stay on subject without letting the piece get boring. Pretty good stop-and-go like flow, the multi's were good but not that much wordplay but it's still above avarage drop
God shit

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Bang On The Table Productions

tightness blunt and by the way i am a warlord papa it wasnt a beaf line

I was wonderin'.. it looked like a beef line.. lol.. I guess, what up fam...

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CHILLEN PA WHEN WE COLLABING

off the hook i liked that shit
it was long but good drop somemore shit man

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5027#post595027

^^ peep my battle by the way