10 lines
no crew
no dickriding
no hate votes

these are your rules so you spit first other wise you will be known as a bitch throughout Rap Battles

soulseeker fucked em up vote=soulseeker................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................

u did good.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

yo Asoldier...here...i'mma bust my rhymes right now...i know you offline...so get at me as soon as you get this...here i go........................(and come on deadly alliance...yo i dint bust yet...so yeah...that first vote i didnt deserve...my bad Asoldier...here i go

aright, the lyrical assassin came to roc this mic::i'm pushin' the big wheels and you still sportin' the trike/ (trike=tricycle)
we both are new to this rapbattles forum::but here you are actin' like you top dog, when you really of the "bitch decorum"/(decorum=behavior)
you better be careful on my war battleground::cause "a soldier" should really watch every detail that surrounds/
cause my rhymes are somewhat like mines::either you encounter them when you step, while some others are timed/
to explode on you, leaving nothing but torn pieces::my lines are lyrically inclined nothing but devine vocab releases/
until this "ASoldier" ceases to exist:: i'll torture him like i'm the dragon and he's been kissed/ (kiss of the dragon)
this soldier's been captured, to the troops he's M.I.A:: he's under my containment, never to see the light of day/ (M.I.A.+military code for Missing In Action)
it's either you go out that way, or i'll straight, Kill you In Action:: realize that when you first saw SOUL, it was a fatal attraction/ (killed in acton=K.I.A)
you thought and decided to fuck with the wrong man:: your soul's been sought out, and i hold it in the palm of my hand/
i'm leaving you gripping, but you'll soon lose your RapBattle pride, and it's this rap alone that will lead to it's subside/ (Subside=to gradually disappear)

sorry yo...got caught up in family shit...get at me...i wanna see your rebuttle....one................................... ............................

uppin' for some votes...we need to know who won............................................... .................................................. ......................................

how can you upp for votes when you were tha only one to post a verse,
well imma juss break your verse down then when he spits ill break his down, imma explain it verry well becuz i cannot poll vote, can you hit up one of my battles on the front page.


aright, the lyrical assassin came to roc this mic::i'm pushin' the big wheels and you still sportin' the trike/
we both are new to this rapbattles forum::but here you are actin' like you top dog, when you really of the "bitch decorum"/
~iight flow~~nice punch~~flow not Consistant~
you better be careful on my war battleground::cause "a soldier" should really watch every detail that surrounds/
cause my rhymes are somewhat like mines::either you encounter them when you step, while some others are timed/
~good punch~~nice flow~~but unconsistant flow~
to explode on you, leaving nothing but torn pieces::my lines are lyrically inclined nothing but devine vocab releases/
until this "ASoldier" ceases to exist:: i'll torture him like i'm the dragon and he's been kissed/
~nice wordplay~~straight flow~ ~not consistant~
this soldier's been captured, to the troops he's M.I.A:: he's under my containment, never to see the light of day/
it's either you go out that way, or i'll straight, Kill you In Action:: realize that when you first saw SOUL, it was a fatal attraction/
~bad flow~~light punch~
you thought and decided to fuck with the wrong man:: your soul's been sought out, and i hold it in the palm of my hand/
i'm leaving you gripping, but you'll soon lose your RapBattle pride, and it's this rap alone that will lead to it's subside/
~good finisher~~IIght flow~ ~not Consistant flow~
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Comments
iight you need to work on flow consistancy, make more then 1 line at a time flow,
overall good verse.