here i stand before you...stripped of emotion
its been ten years since weve split..but i still cant move on
invisible glue binds my heart to your face
indented forever in my soul never out of its place
for some reason youve made an everlasting mark
only a young girl smitten by love.its left is binding mark

and here i still stand bfore you..frozen with a blackened heart

my mind struggles to send images to my legs
saying move on leave here..take those enduring steps
like coloumns set in concrete i am forbidden to menouver
i have felt like that since the day you called to say its over
like an egg my soul craked.and feverously spilt into my heart
always wondring and fretting over the thought we were infact.apart

and there i stood before you..frozen with a blackend heart

we struggle to make eye contact barely breathing the words
looking down at your feet i can picture the rest of you.damn it still hurts
out of the whole world we seem to find each other again and again
i feel myself crying inside, just like i did back then
i put on a brave face and asked you how you were
although i wanted to turn and run and get away from here
hoping for an ending to thins nightmare which you started


But i still stand here..from the look on my face you can tell im black hearted

unable to move on...i dont give a shit for guys no more
feelings that once binded strong drape like linen that has tore
i have no chance to forget this stuff for it is too late
you caught me hook line and sinker vouluntarily me acting like bait
but i wanted to partake on my venture thru lifes fate
i kno that all i have for you is love...unable to hate
but your the only one who this curse forsakes
since the day we ment ive been in a dream .still unable to awake

this life i lead backs me into corners that have been darkened
but atleast i am not looking at you and you havent got the sligtest clue that you..... left me broken hearted

yo ma i feel that it reminices me of when my wife died and i lost my kids i felt it we had been togeather since 13

sorry to hear that..what age are you ne ways..... uh no problems..when are you gonna do that collab

im 21 ma she died when i was 20 my son was 4 and 5 my daughters where 2.the collab was pending being pm pm me i got one for you and i and one for the crew

thats was awesome, i was really feeling it...good drop pz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Yo, tha's some good stuff...sad story...good job, panther.

yo.........pledge.............sorry about the ma.............that's some fucked up shit you should've just killed him . anyway this was a niece piece return the favor on my collab with Zainy

Letter to the Close Deceased

thanks for the feed back people much appreciated..... uppin this cause i dont want it to get slept on like so much of my other stuff

nice shit pledge... I was feelin' it... the flow worked well, and I liked the idea of just having a one line hook, it was an interesting read... we gotta discuss that collab today sometime...

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this was a pretty deep track and shit...this was one of the better pieces iv'e seen from you. emotionally deep, yet still maintaining a dark aura. shit was hot.
9/10
peep the collab between me and R.T

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i loved this piece. sorry to hear. i hope to see more like this. maybe you and the rest of the crew should hit the studio and see how things work out. ima buy tha cd as well so ya betta work lol. jk but great shit pleadge.