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ABSOLOGY by ABS
IP: 4E16 090F
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this is a verbal introduction, its one and only function/ is to make my following works more appealing for consumption/ as we enter verse one put on your seat belts and prepare/ cos theres a threat that the material of reality may tear.... [VERSE 1] my flow i use as my armour it becomes a invulnerable exterior/ as i up my game from average to something more superior/ with better lines, rhymes, verbal designs in my repertoire/ i bring resources and bling like a multi billion pound investor/ and bring forth death and instigate life like a mad professor/ im on top of my science and on top of my discipline/ and to some my rhymes hurt there eyes like chlorine/ writing rhymes and verses was an escape whilst a teen/ now i've grown to become a dope drop machine/ streamlined bare ill and lean, i bring fire and burn off steam/ drop and finish later bit busy !! |
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IP: 8701 65C0
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Why Not Just Wait Till You Have It Done, No-one Wants To Read A 1/2 Finshed Piece, And By The Looks Of Things, Not Many People Wanna Read The Finshed Piece Either! |
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IP: EED2 4F8F
thats coming from someone who's lost more battles than won!!!
i dropped to see reactions if it wasnt anygood nothing lost not that i need to explain to u |
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Watch And Learn
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IP: E91B E5BB
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werd^ and dis is coming frum somebody who has more 5 more wins than losses |
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IP: 03D4 DAFE
it was pretty good for a newb. i would give this a 7/10. so i say keep elevatin and concentratin my brotha.
peace |
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IP: 8BEC CACE
the flow wasn't that great...
the piece was aight and shit, but im not feelin it. you have to try to work on flow and work on better word-play and shit. peep my piece feat. rythmic tendicies called 110% raw remix
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IP: D63E 4177
I ain't A Good Battler, But, How Can You Judge Someones Open Mics By There battle Record?
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