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Old 07-04-03, 01:49 PM   #1
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ABSOLOGY by ABS

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[INTRO]
this is a verbal introduction, its one and only function/
is to make my following works more appealing for consumption/
as we enter verse one put on your seat belts and prepare/
cos theres a threat that the material of reality may tear....
[VERSE 1]
my flow i use as my armour it becomes a invulnerable exterior/
as i up my game from average to something more superior/
with better lines, rhymes, verbal designs in my repertoire/
i bring resources and bling like a multi billion pound investor/ and bring forth death and instigate life like a mad professor/
im on top of my science and on top of my discipline/
and to some my rhymes hurt there eyes like chlorine/
writing rhymes and verses was an escape whilst a teen/
now i've grown to become a dope drop machine/
streamlined bare ill and lean, i bring fire and burn off steam/

drop and finish later bit busy !!
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Old 07-04-03, 04:22 PM   #2
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drop and finish later bit busy


Why Not Just Wait Till You Have It Done, No-one Wants To Read A 1/2 Finshed Piece, And By The Looks Of Things, Not Many People Wanna Read The Finshed Piece Either!
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Old 07-04-03, 05:56 PM   #3
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thats coming from someone who's lost more battles than won!!!
i dropped to see reactions if it wasnt anygood nothing lost
not that i need to explain to u
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Old 07-04-03, 06:02 PM   #4
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Why Not Just Wait Till You Have It Done, No-one Wants To Read A 1/2 Finshed Piece, And By The Looks Of Things, Not Many People Wanna Read The Finshed Piece Either!


werd^

and dis is coming frum somebody who has more 5 more wins than losses
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Old 07-04-03, 10:38 PM   #5
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it was pretty good for a newb. i would give this a 7/10. so i say keep elevatin and concentratin my brotha.
peace
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Old 07-04-03, 11:32 PM   #6
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the flow wasn't that great...
the piece was aight and shit, but im not feelin it.
you have to try to work on flow and work on better word-play and shit.
peep my piece feat. rythmic tendicies called 110% raw remix
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Old 07-05-03, 07:08 AM   #7
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I ain't A Good Battler, But, How Can You Judge Someones Open Mics By There battle Record?
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