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no crew hate or dickrydin votes
I return honest votes

aight checkin in try to get verses in by tonight


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iight in,,,, ill try n do it tonight kid besta luck.............................................. .................................

hit this up and i'll return tha favor just
leave your link.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=63376

im da illest inhospitable, leavin u in hospital//
im feelin hostile, so feel ma style//
ill leave ya layin in da gutter, guts sprayed out//
dont bother tryin to put umm back its for the best ya whack//
u must be on crack, ur shit was slack, lemme show u what u lacked//
ur rhyme missed by a mile, it was fuckin juvinile, belyle//
ur lyrically missin while im spendin ma time dissen//
fuckin coke addict, add to that, ur a choke addict//
fuckin bitch cunt, ya bearin da brunt of ma anger, im tellin u, u in danger//
bet get yo arse a canidian mountie, guard u day n night, im givin u such a fright//
but like a candian mountie, *i always get ma man*, bundal u in da back of ma van//* candian mounties motto
drive u to da forrest, make u suffer the worst nightmarish//
hellish experiance u ever seen, pluckin out ya spleen why ya awake//
after im done bein mean, u be wishen ur back dont break cus u a fake//
fuck u im done kickin yo arse for spittin a whack arse rap//
WHACK WHACK goes the sound a ma gun, fuckin makin sure ur gettin some//
now u dead i shot u in da head fucker, im chuckin u in da lake, n all that for bein fake fucker//

Beggining


this Kid wishes that he was spider-man//
He wants to be a hero like him with the writer-stan//*

Your rhymes just are plain, desolite and zainy//
Ya couldn't get a girl wet even if it were rainy//


Building up


Ya need prostitute thats like dell with 24 hour service//
Ya need a police escort just to make it to port jervis//**

You really shouldn't be rapping ya should-be-aclapper//
your happy and ya know itso ya would-wear-a-flapper//***


finisher
Ya wish ya were from the hood so ya could-be-a-thug//
Ya think ya a man look down ya should-see-a-rug//

*Stan lee is the comic book superhero god wrote most comics.

**Dell has 24 hour support. Port Jervis is a town. I saw a sign for it some where

***a flapper is a term from the 20s whick was used to describe a short skirt.

My original verse got deleted when I hit a button so this is all I'm writing.

No beef.

I got some spelling and space errors so just deal with it cause I don't want to edit it so it doesn't look like I changed my verse.

Yo, nice job by both of you. Zainy was stronger on flow and methods, but Peyo had much better punches. And punches win battles (sorry zainy). I liked zainy's verse but it was lacking in punches. You could've won easily.

Vote=peyo

Yo, by the way, hit up this battle, its been sleepin' for a while
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51399

both verses were pretty weak...but i'ma go with peyo...his shit hit harder...and had more of a clean cut flow and setup....vote=peyo....oneeeeee

Like constant said, Peyo came harder, with flows, and punches
nice verse though zainy, keep elevatin'

vote - peyo

hit this up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61844
thx

Wasn't feeelin either verse.... peos verse his punches were prti simple... you need a escort like dell support 24 hours why does he need one????
Anyway i dun like verses's that are too complex jus pisses me off.....
Anyway neither really were that good but structure punches and flow went to peyo.....
Otha kat ya need to fix ya structure...

My vote =Peyo

Pce

& can ya close this battle this guy DR himself and i jus' wanna get it closed....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63224
Be much preciated

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