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Beliefs
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People have beliefs in themselves but not in eachother/
Maybe were all bitches goin through lifes weather/ consequences of our mistakes chooses our fate/ even lil bart simpson has a belief of bein bad ass of the state/ Wether the moves are crutial or critical goin about our beliefs is pitiful/ Look at the east indians for example they still use pow wows in there rituals/ if you walk over a penny an put it in your pocket good luck will soon appear/ if i really step under a ladder will that end my intire career/ beliefs arent right beliefs arent wrong but beliefs keep us strong/ This rhyme isnt to great but it makes a lotta sence/ when you think about life only 10 percent is seriously suspence/ the other 90 is hate love an envy/ But if you are a good boy an girl mommy will talk to the easter bunny/ that a phoney crock of crack, why the fuck didja make me believe in shit like that/ why not god or geezus or to treat eachother fairly/ you say u do i say its very rarily for sme1 to say summin positive usually/ do you believe you hate every1 you will achieve an be cool n the ladies will drool over you at school/ I've been bullied an jumped an served enough hate that im comin back on the bullshit/ i believe you give me this hunger for killin the pitch cuz i juz wonna make summin so ill knock u out an put yah in a pit/ believen can sometimes be dreadful or even lovely/ i do believe im'a murder you juz for makin funna me for bein in poverty/ I didnt believe my dad was dead 2 months ago but now i have to/ i use to believe docters were smart now i c they get paid for no reason the dumb asses cant even cure the flu/ Geezes believed everybody was loyal...then why the fuck am i struggling so hard to stay away from you people so i dont fall into 6 feet of soil/ critizise my writting but i'll be back for a reply about how yah lil mother fuckers are all gunna die/ i'm not gunna lie my vocabulary blows ass but thats what happens when you flunk every fucking english class/ I dont even believe there was a reason for me to keep breathing my emotions are over lapping my membrain this pain i cant take im losing it wheres the stake put in me like a vampire an i will never return i will rot in peices cuz i believe its my turn ta burn in my beliefs of i got no reason for breathin...... I tryed to get a story line going...i wasnt to worried about vocab but ive been strugglin with story lines an stayin on topic so this is a drop to c how its goin...hope iits gettin better...ppzz
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VERY CONSTRUCTIVE EXTREMELY WELL CONSTRUCTED........IT LACKED A LIL IN THE INTRO I THINK YOU WAS JUST TRYING TO KEEP A BEAT THIS SHIT IS HOT IN THE LONG RUN
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