this battle is

20-30 lines
Yah know the rules
Ill spit 1st

Hey man, i cant spit right now cuz i have 2 active battles, I have to wait till one of them closes out.....ight? You can spit if ya want

I brought a Knife to a gun fight//
To killmyself twice to see what it felt like//
these lyrics i write, dont aply the Freedom of Information//
so danguarus five year olds get incarsarated for miss-behavin//
your a fourteen year old rapper in Identity crisis//
despite this, im spinless makin sure your instatustionlized mindless//
when you speak my name, it brings out a jewish burning spree//
god of chaos is me, and Duce I Rae is what you see//
Get your meanings stait before you speak of a name like me//
when you write your rhyemes its labor intensive//
Not to mention exspesive calling 1-900-rap-pers,
"I need lyrics and please make them afencive"//
so before you talk shit again think of that facts//
your fourteen fucken wit a man whos 24 who carrys an axe//
I swing that shit like a sycile//
chop ya head off like its a frozen pop-sycile//
Now that you opened your mouth you started this war//
deformed soars opened an toarn apart by lyrics that are two worlds apart//
Im coming after you to attack your weaknesses//
Confuss you like gods mother ta-reasa`s weaknessess//
I was produced to be a lyrical hybred//
taken two parental generation rappers crossbred//
What poped out is what you see now, a mutant rapper ten generations ahead//
so i can drop 30 lines rhyemen diss-pursed directions in reverse//
now just to catch on you have to think in mulitple directions//
Lost in the complex refelcitions of miss guided directions//
Now im here to collect on ya stollen lyrics you jacked,
form other rappers who I respect//
Now you fucked wit a profestional wit deadly tatcis//
I fire of lyrics like pac that are automatics//
but you do have one thing in common with 2 pac, you copyed his actin//
infact right to that T of crack addict actions//

you going to spit or what dogg, aight Peace
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hold on man...........igot shit to do................i'll spit as soon as i can...............................................

yo ill hit this up afta with a poll vote
******
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pEaCe
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G-Units "I Smell Pussy"

I smel...(scratch)
I smell, I smell...(error)
Damn, Lemme just make this straight...(HELL YEAH)
I SMELL PUSSY!

-Beat turned off- Lemme spit this off the top of my head...

*haha*

Ima bout to Merk this kid "duce" the amount of lines he spit//
I got "duce" the amount of gats u got, Hear it? "Click-click-click"//

Crowd: Murder him Slik!.....

Half the lines this kid spits are "bitten" cuz i can see the "tooth marks"//
and now that i've got it under "investigation", hes callin me a "knark"//

-This kid makes me laugh, Lemme Switch it-

Im about to make "50 cent" a little happier, and its not by being "laid"//
Eyo! 50, I just found the "fat kid that loves cake"!//
This kids so "fake", Just take a little water and rub "tru MC" off his fuckin "face"//

-mmmhmmmmm-

Im comin closer and closer, Inch by Inch, I aint even got a "dick", but i still got more "length"//
Man, You could never "CUM"(come) as far as me, Let me rederect you to the "sperm bank"//

Crowd: Feelin that one...Ouch....

Hey Ludicris! What do you if a bitch out disses you? ACT A FOOL!//
Welcome to the "real world" man, i think you tryin to skip a few "grades", just STAY IN SCHOOL!//

I think you need to slow ur self down, go back to music class, "Doe-rae-me"//
Listen to ur teacher, try "harder", dont be so playful-ly//

Crowd: Im likin this show...

-Lemme rise to the top-

The heat is rising, and so are my words, boy, I think its gettin way to "hot in hurrrr"//
Kid, you dont wanan step in my path, Im gettin millions of record deals, and ur still tryin to pass math//

-here we go-

Someone call the police i think this dude need a little "protection"//
Tell them to bring the "trogen" hes havin another "erection"//


-----Time to end this shit-----

This whole time i been rappin, you so amazed you didnt even "blink"//
I think i saw somebody lookin fo ya, oh yeah it was Ja and MURDA INC...

Crowd: AHHHHH...DAMN


Im out......payce

Let the votes begin............................................. .................................................. .........................................

uppin............................................. .................................................. .............................................1st.. .................................................. ....

Yo silk dont mean to change the subject but check you PM.. Peace
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My Pm dont work. Tell me right here.............................................. .................................................. ......

oh I just wanted to holla at you on aim or yahoo or msn can I have yours anyone one of them will work hehe

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Aim- Freestylemyrhyme



2nd uppin...............Lookin fo votes............................................. ...............................

Ouch, damn, Duce... you ok? you got merked, lol, just kiddin, but yea, slik took this, that luda line was hilarious, i can't vote though, RB dont' let me, it always says i needa post an explanation even though i do, i liked how u set that battle up like if u were at a real battle, nice shit. Duce... u got some balls though goin up against a vet, and u had nice shit too... but not enough. peAce... no beef.