to all you dumb assess THIS AINT ged classess
when will you learn?
play with FIRE and get used to BURN, hurb! get what you ERN-

talk shit!- any man can get shot- AND HIT-keep it real, even BIGGIe got PACed-

JA became the first thug to get love doing pop-
PUFFY'S caeer haulted this year but still claims he wont stop-

and it's a trip- how fake thugs act real,get ripped- then switch-with the latest fashions so people will except-
but i diss people to survive no man is exzempt-
its natural you get DOGGED,since life's a BITCH-

as far as open text-every one of you catch wreck-spend your life HUSTLEN YOUR CAREER LAST now it's in your FINAL STRETCH-

there alot of fake thugs-you know who you are when you here kids in clubs-with potential and you give em no love-

it must be hard when your overzelous -and jelous-when you claim killer till you really around real felons-

fuck with me and i will kill you leaven you torn-then get TED BUNDY to shoot you for necro porn-great rappers are born-

not taught to be apraised-wanna see beaf {grow up}watch my middle finger get raised-

moching me is mochory-to the 3 rd degree-BLASPHOMY- you can go to HELL and survive long enough to be alive when they perform the ortopsy-
Diss myself on track so GOD can diss me back-im loven animosoty-
but im gaurenteed to go to heaven for real-cause on duets ive saved many careers from being killed-

see i got the heart for this-brain to be twise as nice and deliver hits- that can make your brain twist- like the motions of a wrist-

rappers dropping dead-nigguz catching aids through head-fake catz claim the code of the street turning then tap they boys in to the feds-

that's why i dont rap boute being gangsta-or being a thug-
whats the point the answer-be me catching slugs-
im from the street to but if you live it-then why promote on qoutes and turn it to a gimic-

well im staying me-staying being M.K.C- even if i sell crappy-i know i was who i was ment to be and die happy-

^^^
nice finisher...

overall it was o.k.. elevate a lil on your wordplay....

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thnxs but what lacked

UPPIN

feelin' it... nice wordplay with the biggy got PACed line... flow was a li'l off... also the moching me is mochery bar... ill... keep it up dawg..

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uppin

that was once again an ill drop lol kjeep it comin man i like readin your drops

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The Weathers Art
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My Teenage Eyes
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Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
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THNX PEEP B.R.E BAZTAD

thnx twin mad respects to you