Aight,
Now Ima loosen you up. Vocab "complicated" accept fo the word Fuck.//
Cadillac and a Truck, Fuck you and 22's - my 44's is up.//

Platinum Recordz/Collab, Im drunk and sprayin "inhalents" at the
driver of the cab.//
Platinum Recordz, Bad Boy was oldnews, you rap or go to Brooklyn fo some cheese cake * dawg you choose.//

Rockin my watch wit "links" in the "glass" so High I swear I could juss see "*Qb Snyper*" pass.//
Gettin "Sexually" "Harrased" by that pussy "*Mr.Legend*". Phrantiks on *13th Disciple's* nuts and still try'n to fuck me in the ass.//

I aint like dat, go to class, but than again dis aint school, Im on Rap Battles.Com bout to throw a pink slip at you.//

Chrous:
O Mutha Fuckas Who I Be,? That *Gangsta White Boy* from the
F-L-I-N-T.
O Mutha Fuckas Who I Be,? Platinum Recordz motha fucka, who wanna fuck wit me?

Verse 2

I don't play cuz, I don't "drop" bombs, when I say that I would be comparein my self to "Sadamm".//
I "reatliate" and leave the record "spinnin" got the doctors givin you a 25% (percent") chance of "livin."//
You a "discrace" that aint even worth a "phrase" so "dephrase" yo shit Phrantik, you pussy ass "MOD" and get the fuck out my face.//


I aint got no time to play yo lil bitch games, I pull the "Glock" and "re-aim", the "barrell" at KnightShade, befo I take my finger off the "trigger" (Underhated~OverHated's a Wigga)/fuck the gun being "cocked" I used the "12 guage."//

I got "Bullet" holes-"dividein" you up "evenly", Im at Phrantiks house wit his girl, and guess what she's "leavin" him, "decievin" him, you livin in "sin", "lyrics" hard enough to make *P.Diddy* start rappin again.//

Chrous:
O Mutha Fuckas Who I Be,? That *Gangsta White Boy* from the
F-L-I-N-T.
O Mutha Fuckas Who I Be,? Platinum Recordz motha fucka, who wanna fuck wit me?

Hopeing these people respond.

yo man...i aint gona really go into this one....for obvious reasons....but your beef with these fellas are your thing....

BUT.....ya had a good drop....everything were up to standard...ya know...nothing really to tell you what to improve....

the structure was weird....it was hard to tell wen and were the line started and shit....but....it was dope...

thanx for the feed back on my shit....peace man...!!