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Old 07-13-03, 12:38 AM   #16
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Fgee: If emotions could ever be expressed in writing, I could definitely feel yours. . It helps that you write a story pertaining to a subject I can asbolutely relate to, and, all beef aside, I respect the emotions. If you can find the time to improve some of the writing elements (namely: flow), you'd be a #1 seed regardless of the p3 factor.

LaRyan Shabaz: You always come nice, almost too nice, for RB. . I always take your verses to have almost satirically-inclined themes that are hard for a lot of people to understand. Although the theme is not underlined, your writing is always extremely polished and well articulated. However, in this scenario, my vote would go to Fgee. I'm sure that a decent percentage of my vote was decided by the way he used his topic and I'm sure you'll stay doing big things in the future.

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Old 07-13-03, 02:26 AM   #17
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Look I'm gonna be perfectly honist... EVERYONE ELSE READ SOME FUCKED UP VURSES??
Everyone else musta seen something that I didnt....
Point... Fgee rap-ed about fuckin basketball,
Well thats all there really is to say about all that...
Shabaz came hard as fuck and took this without any fuckin doubt, the whole layout was,
well nearly flawless... Point came well, and it all jus flowed...
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Old 07-13-03, 01:59 PM   #18
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Fgee. how you used basketball in with the topic was dope, wasn't completley on topic but was tight, flow etc.... was all on point. Prop's

Shabaz. You also werent fully on topic but you could relate them
so it was okay, The story was Madd tight i dont think many people got their heads around it, but was dope.
You were pretty even with fgee's verse except for the story and the complexity, So i'm Giving this to Laryan.

Nice verses both, many props

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Old 07-13-03, 11:57 PM   #19
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Quote:
Originally posted by G. Hod
Fgee: If emotions could ever be expressed in writing, I could definitely feel yours. . It helps that you write a story pertaining to a subject I can asbolutely relate to, and, all beef aside, I respect the emotions. If you can find the time to improve some of the writing elements (namely: flow), you'd be a #1 seed regardless of the p3 factor.

LaRyan Shabaz: You always come nice, almost too nice, for RB. . I always take your verses to have almost satirically-inclined themes that are hard for a lot of people to understand. Although the theme is not underlined, your writing is always extremely polished and well articulated. However, in this scenario, my vote would go to Fgee. I'm sure that a decent percentage of my vote was decided by the way he used his topic and I'm sure you'll stay doing big things in the future.

VOTE: Fgee


I Fully Agree With Lyricali ... (G.Hod)
I Just Liked The Way That Fgee Used The Topic...
And You Will Have Legendary Shit In The Future..

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Old 07-14-03, 01:26 AM   #20
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[15] Fgee beats [2] LaRyan Shabaz


Upset of the century?
or Misseeding? ... blah



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Old 07-14-03, 02:07 AM   #21
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Misseeding.
We all know I'm the greatest writer of all-time who loses.
20" Blades on the Impala.
 
Old 07-14-03, 05:53 PM   #22
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yeh seedings fucked up
but good battle man
your piece was nice
 
 


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