discussed this battle by pm...
i cant wait to go...
so ill go first
20 max...
take as much time as u need to reply dawg...
i realize ur in other battles u can go tomorrow or the next day if ya want...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=65283
can you drop a vote on that link n i'll hit this up when you both drop?
thanx

like preserved food i got this battle under-wraps...only time he's seen lightning-applause is in thunder-claps!//
its amazing to see him blunder-raps, cats run-to-nap..cuz only time he saw success' location was under-maps//

im like mind games cuz smash his brain to pieces...
he thought he could win...and then came-my-thesis//
claim-to-be-this but you cant stain-my-features..you learn in battle like i became-ya-teacher//
i'll smash-ya-kid cuz i contain-the-weaker...wash-away-ya-features cuz its fun maiming-creatures//

he's bucklin-under-pressure like knees-staggerin-from-weight..his flows like unwanted salesmen cuz nobodys baggin-the-rate// 12
he's spittin old shit and dont even realize-its-played...pretty sad that its that out-of-date//

he's comin to this battle unprepared, and without-a-clue...good rap from him is like early morning weather talk...shout its due!// (dew as in rain in mornings) 16
know its comin, castle, when i shout-at-you...he's stickin to schedule...and pretty unbelievable...when he's
outta-glue!// 18

write 20 or under yo...

^^^that was nice son...this battle should be hot if he comez nice...holla at me when he posts his verse aiiight god...

Yea this ain't a check in cause i got 2 otha battles but i WILL check in when one of my otha battles closes......
Good drop dawg......

Checkin tha fuck in finally!!!......
Heres my verse yo.,.....

Yo Mic Check 1,2...

Second battle feeble, like skateboards, this time its flipped//*
Your Feeble punches are far of the mark, cause i got your brain ripped//
Your style like lawn bowls, its old and played//
Smack your body into tha ground, jus' so you can get layed//
If your voicebox produced hash, your spits still wouldn't be dope//
Tryin' ta win dawg, theres NO hope, like tryin' run up a 180 degree slope//
I'll leave you lost for words like you was a mime artist//
Leave you cryin' after i leave you merked, cause i know when you lose you r-pissed//
You probably a loser with no life or friends, jus pre-writen lyrics, and a good school report//
Like a obiese persons legs, your record, is the only thing givin you support//
Cut you up, divide you like it was maths, but im smart so you not hard//
My punches connect like bones, leavin you shakin your arms like a retard//
Read a book titled cooking with herbs, and you were the author//
Your drop so highlighted it looks like a keyboard was ya mom, and a blackboard your father//

Limpim' long claimin' you got shot, but your boy friend is jus' mounted like a elephant//
Feeble, nice attempt to be hard, but you could be cement, and you'd still be feminent//

Lets start tha votin......

good battle, very close but i'ma give this one to Feeble Minded cause he had good wordplay, but other than that, the other categories was pretty close...

VOTE=FEEBLE MINDED

peep this and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Honestly i thought feeble took this one
harder punchlines
vote-feeble minded
no hate tho castle

check out my battle wit crysis close as hell
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65773

feeble gets my vote no hate tho this battle was tight..........

Vote - FeebleMinded

check this tight battle im in with Merking King and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65773

thanks peace

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hmmm...
I knew feeble would prob take this one, THE SECOND TIME again....
Oh well i dun back down and look at his record that says it all.....

More votes.........

i aint gonna poll vote goes crew connections but heres my 2_cents

punches-feeble
wordplay-feeble
flo-feeble
sytle-feeble

i think feeble really took this hands down, and the main thing he had was the harder punches, good battle

uppin..............>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>respect castle nice battle...