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Old 07-14-03, 01:58 PM   #1
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God's Plan???

IP: 798E 1507

i cant keep going on, im 'dealing' with this 'bullish' its "torture"
everything that looks 'appealing'is not, even the 'pullpit' will "scorch ya"
babies cant even trust their mommas theyll "abort ya"
ya so call friends talk behind ya back 'ready' to "report ya"
black azz to the cops now they moving in 'steady' to "escort ya"
off to the "prison", going crazy feel like theres no reason to be "livin"
So you try to kill yourself with what you was 'givin'
now you stuck in isolation with psychiatric 'supervision'//

Andnow you ready to be 'released' for good "behavior"
telling the 'police' you changed you accepted God as your "savior"
now you back on these streets asking for a "favor"
what "dumbness" niggas run around the hood thinking they "run this" 'planet' hard to 'understand it', only the dead are taking life for 'granet' yeah we was all born 'second handed' with the ability to have our knowledge base 'expanded' but niggas dont care they rather be lost left out,'stranded' this cant be the way God 'Planned It'//
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Old 07-14-03, 02:01 PM   #2
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TO SHORT THE TOPIC DIVERSITY AND CONTENT WAS TO ILL TO LEAVE AT THIS EXTEND IT FAM IT IS HOT
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Old 07-14-03, 03:28 PM   #3
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I was feelin this shit man, just add another verse and it would be extremely tight man...

not sure if you can do this in here, but here's a link for my open mic, was wondering if you could comment on it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65540
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