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07-14-03, 05:01 PM
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IP: 548F C165
Tell her to just keep a positive mind frame everthing will work out in the end. It will be hard at first but nothing last forever
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07-29-03, 02:08 AM
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InSaNe KiLlAh
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IP: 71CE 2E84
this was nice....rhymes were symplistic...then again...it's hard to use large vocabulary when doing an emotional song...i liked this shit....show's what u went through....and how u pulled through it...yeah....real emotional....
BREAKDOWN Multis - good Vocab - ok Metas - good Emotion - excellent RhymeScheme - excellent Flow - very good (except for Yamagasea...lol...couldn't pronounce) Overall - u had some nice emotional shit goin on here....i think if u would'a put more time into it...it would've come out much better.... Rating 8.5/10 peace 4:20
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07-29-03, 03:03 AM
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IP: 3BD1 75AB
ill shit,i felt this drop fa real, emotion felt and over all well put down ya dig,well keep droppin tha real shit boo,~1~
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